| #1 badtz maru[110059] |
| pcp108471pcs.echryh01.nj.comcast.net |
| gfg |
| #2 Eradicate~Me[110060] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| thx to Ling-Erie for proofreading, badtz I didn't use yours tt |
| #3 sync[110061] |
| cs242232-100.houston.rr.com |
| raar |
| #4 badtz maru[110062] |
| pcp108471pcs.echryh01.nj.comcast.net |
| wtf raters, give this a -1 for using ling's proofing and not mine =[~~ |
| #5 EldritchEvil[110063] |
| nr11-216-196-185-17.fuse.net |
Yay! I got in the single digits. Nyah.
Nice report, excellent graphics, good description of the game.
The only thing it missed was anime chicks. ^_^ |
| #6 sync[110064] |
| cs242232-100.houston.rr.com |
| haha astic is a newbie |
| #7 ~ViLaToR~[110065] |
| 24.27.228.60.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
| stfu sync |
| #8 Napoleic[110066] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| gw |
| #9 Amoeba_Boy[110069] |
| spider-wa033.proxy.aol.com |
Sweet, I've been waiting for this
Now to read |
| #10 derek[110070] |
| AC9181C3.ipt.aol.com |
bad:
"Don't expect to lose your breath, or suffer multiple simultaneously heart attacks"
simultaneous*
"Astic also randomed, receiving red terran opposite of his opponent"
then why are lings attacking a blue rax in the 2nd pic :|
"The attack doesn't do as much damage as I proposed, 2 scvs are killed, and the mutalisks are driven off by goliaths, big fucking whoop."
unnecessary?
"a group of upgraded hydralisks proves to be too big of a hastle,"
hassle*
aside from that and some weird grammar and punctuation, writing in this BR is vastly improved over your previous ones
good:
Humor: bashing tmac that much was a little over the top, but i guarantee you if bob or a friend of t_mac had said that it, would have been fucking hilarious. nice attempt
Pics: i liked them all, except for the minimaps. i think they needed more simplicity
Overall writing: definitely above average, and a huge improvement over past br's
grade: A
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| #11 ZerG~LinG[110071] |
| p406-114.ppp.get2net.dk |
Too bad the games weren't fantastic :(
CAnt believe he gave 50 bucks back to the fund 8(
GW with report, 7-8 |
| #12 Eradicate~Me[110073] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| wasn't exactly trying to break t_mac down into tears, but I guess I see what you're saying derek |
#13  [110074] |
| 192-24.73-24.tampabay.rr.com |
| Ah, we were made to remain nigh unto each other, ye kindly strange marvels; and not like timid birds did ye come to me and my longing--nay, but as trusting ones to a trusting one! |
| #14 7)Angels.[110075] |
| nh-londonderry1a-194.mrrmnh.adelphia.net |
And now to follow Bob's comment with something equally prophetic...
Drawing a blank so
(insert random witty anecdote from funnymarx here)
"Marijuana... at least it's not crack..." |
| #15 Eradicate~Me[110076] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| wow thanks for the 6 bob, u retired ass ;[ |
| #16 |]agomar[110078] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112436.sympatico.ca |
| you didnt close tables so I cant read it on netscape. Otherwise I'd give you a 10 =[ |
| #17 Eradicate~Me[110081] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| wow this is really stupid, im done with br'ing for a long time. |
| #18 Eradicate~Me[110084] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| wow make that forever |
#19  [110085] |
| user158.net128.va.sprint-hsd.net |
hey erad not bad
overall, your writing was pretty terrible :|. It's clear you did this in a rush, and if I were you, I would have proofread it much, much more, and re-written a number of sentences that sound awkward. maybe you should have stuck with badtz's proofreading...
the games were so-so, as were the pics. Actually, the pics were pretty good, as is your standard.
I think i would give this a 7, but ill stick with an 8 for some reason. I think this deserves a gold, but not a high gold |
| #20 Frenzy[110093] |
| h24-67-24-80.cg.shawcable.net |
Red Terran? strrrrrong.
Ninja Style =|==> |
| #21 Ling-erie[110094] |
| host213-122-212-26.in-addr.btopenworld.com |
| gw |
| #22 Breeze[110102] |
| 62.176.93.129 |
Erad, honestly I don't like your reaction, I mean the part about not making more reports.
Bob is just another moron, and I am sick of his lameness too, but I'd never let his retarded opinion or rating or whatever affect the way I make reports. It maybe even adds a little bit to the pleasure of posting another report, I love the pain he feels when people that don't respect him have success and he can do nothing about it.
Expect a few other local heros to back him up indirectly by pointing out why your report isn't good (that can be done to absolutely every report at this site). The typical NH lobism that disguists me, but as I said, you quitting is like giving up to them.
Keep in mind that the people who actually run this site (JV, Mark, YRM) and many fans who read reports for the fun, and don't care who wrote them and if he's kissing their ass, ... long sentence, but those people enjoy the effort you put in your reports and respect it.
Anyway, nice job. |
| #23 xld[110124] |
| spider-te083.proxy.aol.com |
| maybe bob didnt like it |
| #24 stonecoldnewbie[110133] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
| im glad astic lost ^_^ btw at shox i said apex would win.. GG |
| #25 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[110142] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| nice man nice |
| #26 Ana[110144] |
| dslpppc131.phnx.uswest.net |
| hahahahahaha breeze telling someone they're reaction is poor |
| #27 [SM]Strega~F[110151] |
| 2Cust248.tnt9.adl1.da.uu.net |
Feel the Zergy power!!!
-No comment-
Strega |
| #28 Breeze[110171] |
| 62.176.93.129 |
| Me telling someone that "they are reaction" is poor. Is this sentence somehow related to any recent event that I am unaware of? |
| #29 xld[110174] |
| spider-mtc-tb042.proxy.aol.com |
now that i think about it, bob said he lost the password a while back, so either he got it back which seems like a lotta trouble for bob, or someone else rated a six and is scared to say anything
bobs post is before DrA's, and the eight on the rating is before the six, so the second part makes sense
SAVE THE NEWT |
| #30 Raider[110179] |
| wkstn113-243.village-c.georgetown.edu |
| Fuck Bob--he's a moron, he's know for it. Keep'em coming Erad, it was a good read. |
#31  [110185] |
| h66-38-206-88.gtconnect.net |
| not bad, 8 |
| #32 CrackHeadJeb[110186] |
| mu-196078.dhcp.missouri.edu |
6-8 range. It's difficult to make a gold report out of those games, good job.
-CHJ |
| #33 Ana[110188] |
| bac16g18.inre.asu.edu |
| goddamn, fucking up "their" sorta deflated this amazing opportunity for character assassination |
| #34 [110189] |
| 192-24.73-24.tampabay.rr.com |
no, i gave it a 6
i was gonna give it a 5 but that ss of astic taking it like a bitch after the games is funny |
| #35 [110190] |
| 192-24.73-24.tampabay.rr.com |
| and yes! i did lose the password! but i! found it! |
| #36 Playa Hata[110191] |
| 64.26.98.90 |
| Is that the reason I can't read some reports on netscape? Not closing tables? |
| #37 [110193] |
| 192-24.73-24.tampabay.rr.com |
| if you opinion is different, it is wrong, keep this in mind |
| #38 [110204] |
| 192-24.73-24.tampabay.rr.com |
The typical NH lobism that disguists me, but as I said, you quitting is like giving up to them.
lobbyism? |
| #39 Eradicate~Me[110207] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| breeze wtf? I am not quitting from battlereporting because of bob, I don't mind bob at all. The thing I do mind is there is absolutely zero appreciation for reporters these days. Take someone copying the html for this report and posting it as another report, not to mention all of the other idiots that have posted crap the past 2 weeks. Only a handful of people enjoy/read br's, and I'm not going to post just for them. |
| #40 Anti-Progress[110215] |
| wdsr53-p1-59.daktel.net |
I will now create an essay on why I appreciate reporters:
They've got more skills than I.
Most have a *rather* intimate knowledge of HTML and/or flash.
They provide entertainment for those of us who can't or don't go out and play SC (or want to see how a decent player can play).
I also appreciate real reporters because they actually post reports, the people who've been posting their crap on this site lately deserve to be shot. Alot.
Okay, so not much of an essay I'll admit, but a list is as good as an essay. Especially since no one cares what us unknown people talk about. |
| #41 [110217] |
| user241.net130.va.sprint-hsd.net |
erad, plenty of people read/enjoy reports w/o commenting. lack of respect sure is annoying, but with so many *terrible* report writers and the number of spammers, is it hard to blame people?
uh back to the main point: lots of people enjoy reports, dont quit because of the rest of em
and btw you shouldnt make reports seeking fame or instant respect. reports are supposed to be fun for you, the reporter also |
| #42 Eradicate~Me[110218] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| point out where I said I want "instant fame". If anything the number one reason I'm done with it is because it doesn't interest me anymore. That and the fact I can't ever get a good feel for it to the point my readers actually can finish it, without proclaiming that the writing fucking sucks. |
| #43 [110244] |
| user241.net130.va.sprint-hsd.net |
fucking bullshit.. i just wrote an entire essay about all this shit aks;lfkaj;slk ls;kl;alkaj;lskjd;l k FUCK 100 CHAR LIMIT
when you said "The thing I do mind is there is absolutely zero appreciation for reporters these days." i assumed that the reason you were quitting was due to the lack of respect. sorry for misinterpreting?
also, please dont put quotes around "instant fame" if i didnt say that.
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| #44 [110245] |
| user241.net130.va.sprint-hsd.net |
the gist of my last post:
- put more time into your writing, it seems to me that you didnt read and re-write a single paragraph in this entire br. writing a br is like writing a story, you have got to revise to make it coherent and interesting
- if you really DID put alot of time into this writing, then, i dont know.. put more time in? :| or just pair up with someone - you do the images and someone else do the writing - graphic imaging is clearly your forte'
- just shitting out a br doesn't get respect; you MUST prove to us that you deserve it. if you really didn't put time into this, like i imagine, then you don't deserve any more than the 6 bob gave you
- dont quit because of this. from the comments, it's clear that a number of peopel enjoy your reports (me included). |
| #45 |]agomar[110270] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517215.sympatico.ca |
| Dr A is pure, uncensored manner. |
| #46 Eradicate~Me[110310] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
wow dra, u must have missed a lot of reports ;[
search my name, you should find a report with me doing to graphics and luckynewbie:p doing the writing. It wasn't done that long ago ;o |
| #47 Adrenaling[110314] |
| cr862712-a.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| hrm... |
| #48 [110322] |
| user120.net097.va.sprint-hsd.net |
haha never saw that, ill go read it
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| #49 Tavernology[110367] |
| 1Cust188.tnt5.adl1.da.uu.net |
#10, it is 'hassle', or at least it is in Australia.
Hey Erad, you do good work, you just need to improve your grammer a bit, and people will stop bitching about it.
Pretty damn good report, please don't quit doing them, you're good at it, and you post actual reports, not spam. Imagine if all the good reporters quit submitting for a month or two. Don't start a trend.
I'd give this an 8 or 9. |
| #50 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[110382] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| hahaha DRA skdjhfkjldshgkjdkshgfhahahhskshkakhk |
| #51 krebs[110736] |
| h0008c78fa265.ne.mediaone.net |
| shut up erad you loser |
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