| #1 vincible[111686] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
| I make my debut on this site at 1st! |
| #2 Executer[111687] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| sry ppl, dont know what that white bar thingy is... =[ |
| #3 g0t4c0n[111688] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| ooh I like the pretty pictures |
| #4 vincible[111689] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
| Nice report... but battlecruisers against toss on temple? I've never had that work against anyone but a newbie. Though maybe you're better with them than I am. |
| #5 Black_Abyss[111690] |
| 2Cust15.tnt8.lax3.da.uu.net |
Nice report, nice pics (and huge too, the way I like it), game was just a little one-sided, but overall very nice =]
8
5th |
| #6 Eradicate~Me[111691] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| oh i had no idea who'd win this |
| #7 Zeratul[111692] |
| user-0ccek68.cable.mindspring.com |
nice report and really good pics :) but i don't agree with attacking the interceptors with your bcs, especially if you had yamato.
8 |
| #8 nrkizt[111693] |
| adsl-63-201-88-57.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
Pretty good. Nice to see a steady improvement in all your reports so far. Looking forward to your next report. White bar owns you though! =
Battlecruisers... you definitely need more sci vessel support... at least 1 every 2 cruisers... comsat, then EMP, irradiate or Yamato templars to minimize storm. Keep tabs on health of cruisers and d-matrix heavily damaged ones. I also like to have a dropship of scvs set to follow cruisers, drop scvs and repair when necessary.
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| #9 Forever_Knight[111694] |
| s15.dial1.pro.nac.net |
I like the way you mentioned several times that this kid was awesome so that when you lost...it didn't reflect so badly on you. Good work. Minus 2 points for grammatical errors, minus 1 point for the grammatical errors I'm sure I missed, and minus 1 point for the shortness of the report and the white bar thingy. That's a 6.
6
-Forever_Knight |
| #10 Forever_Knight[111695] |
| s15.dial1.pro.nac.net |
Ack! Where'd you get your mini-map from? I see a purple guy, a red guy, a blue guy, and a teal guy. WTF? You better not of made this game up too!
-Forever_Knight |
| #11 ==cas==[111696] |
| 65.119.102.117 |
nohunter pple in general speaking has better skill than this.
you might need to take off that lines. |
| #12 ZerG~LinG[111697] |
| p421-083.ppp.get2net.dk |
As far as i could see, that guy wasn't above nh standards, but wtf.
And for #10, the pic he got at the start is from the scm>jpeg converter, which converts map to jpegs, it places those buildings to show the starting locations.
Oh, the report :) Definetly not an 8, alot of game related mistakes where u refer to him as being terran or whatever:
"My bc's didn't do much 'cept for killin' his CC"
Oh, and the alignning of pics coulda been better, somewhere, there's a pic explaining a paragraph thats way further down.
And another thing: Huge pics are nice :D And its was no problem for my 56k :D
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| #13 ZerG~LinG[111698] |
| p421-083.ppp.get2net.dk |
(continued)
Try to keep the "screenshot taken to adsfasdf" and whatever out of the pic, it looks weird :/
As for the text, try to use less smileys, i found three in most paragraph, but if you were in a good mood when maki' the report, it doesn't matter :D
Haven't got more to say now :)
Long ass comment, didn't check any grammar so its prolly awful asdfasdfasdf
oh yeah, i think its 6.5 or maybe 7 but then again im not a rater :/
Z~LinG |
| #14 Amoeba_Boy[111699] |
| spider-tp081.proxy.aol.com |
"Anyways, I was now thinking of going battlecruisers. Yes, battlecruisers. The terran behemoth of the sky. Man, they own."
Quote anyone??
Some tips, dont EMP goons, at least not when templar are around, hit them instead. Blow up carriers, not interceptors, they return to the carriers and come out healed if they get damged. When playing a toss, comsat the site before you expand there, i just played a game where my opponent couldn't get any expos cuz i had an observer at every availible site.
Also lay off the smiliys, gets kind of annoying seeing :) :( at the end of every sentence.
Other than that it was pretty good, i doubt the guy is pro, or whatever you said he was. But nice report |
| #15 [111700] |
| ppp-206-170-33-130.okld03.pacbell.net |
| nice to finally have pics, but there are waaaay too many commas |
| #16 Executer[111701] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| sry bout the smileys ppl. :( wont happen again. ;) |
| #17 Ling-erie[111703] |
| host213-122-215-25.in-addr.btopenworld.com |
your pics were pointlessly big and badly formatted.
the rest was fine
try to take a while selecting what pics are best and most appropriate, u can't put screenshots of EVERY event in your report (although u seem to have tried). Nice otherwise, except for cursors in pics and "screen shot taken blah blah blah" in some.
btw, probes hover; so mines don't attack them. You should know that by now. Little details like that are annoying when u get them so horribly wrong.
#14, that quote is stolen from other BRs, sorry. |
| #18 Dino Din[111706] |
| dynamic-153-196.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
I dunno what was with this report but ... ugh...
It was just awful in my eyes. I dunno even where to start....
Well... my #1 suggestion is to not hit the print screen button like a spazz. |
| #19 WTH[111708] |
| 65.64.77.89 |
| I may be wrong but wasn't deep six strat meant for a protoss player that went mass goons. |
| #20 slings[111710] |
| spider-tp013.proxy.aol.com |
| Nicely done, rating system is fucked up, if you got a 6 on this and "some" other reports are getting 8s. |
| #21 Keanu_Reaver[111711] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-70.sea.eschelon.com |
| atleast your consistent...three sixes in a row :O |
#22  [111712] |
| user160.net069.fl.sprint-hsd.net |
| six for the total fuck up of format and pics. Thx gw. |
| #23 Anonymous[111713] |
| 216-224-166-100.thegrid.net |
| Hey, what kept confusing me was that you kept saying he expanded to 3, and 3 natural, and you dropped 3's cliff, and 3 this and 3 that...when actually it was at 9. And i'm pretty sure that guy is not above NH level of play, considering the first place he expanded was his natural. But that's a personal pet peeve. |
| #24 Keanu_Reaver[111714] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-70.sea.eschelon.com |
nothing wrong with exping to your natural in tvp if you go with quick obs tech
anyway, just work on your pic formatting/proofreads and you should get a whole lot better |
| #25 Tanks[111715] |
| 144.13.6.10 |
| nice pics, I like it without borders actually. Thing is the "saved image as ####.PCX" is in like half of them. Wait until this message disappears before you take another one - use the replay to do this (takes a few tries sometimes). Next report from you could be 8+, gw! |
| #26 ChessShark[111719] |
| 63.207.254.28 |
Not bad, but the continuous use of errors could make me
cry. Probes hover, goliaths suck against goons, dont know
why you got them, and BC are probably not your best bet in
my opinion. Also, the fact that you never seemed to retreat
and sieged your tanks AFTER he attacks. Plus you shouldnt
attack the interceptors, I really hope that was sarcasm.
Other than that I give it an 11. |
| #27 ZerG~LinG[111721] |
| p403-019.ppp.get2net.dk |
| If you wanna attack the interceptors, use a shitload of m&m, that leaves the carriers as a big hotdog of shit. |
| #28 Katome[111722] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| nice fucking pic theft. Do a search on 'Serious' and look for the picture (a hell of alot better too) with 'Sometimes Shit Happens' going down it that way. Nice gw, that + format=I'm not reading. |
| #29 |]agomar[111725] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517225.sympatico.ca |
Amoeba, no offense but that is the least funny quote suggestion I have ever heard in my life =[.
now to read . . . erm, which based on the commentary so far will no doubt involve burning out my retina and puking all over the keyboard . . . . |
| #30 |]agomar[111726] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517225.sympatico.ca |
ya it was awful formatting, and the pictures annoyed me. ugh, for the work you did on it, it's a pity it sucks so bad.
6. |
| #31 John[111727] |
| adsl-63-206-92-172.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
Hmm is it my idea or is Executer fastexpo?
Fastexpo's IP 24.156.2XXXX
Executer's IP 24.156.2XXXX
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| #32 John[111728] |
| adsl-63-206-92-172.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| also Executer never ansered in his first report saying he used scouts and used cannons to protect his expo when he had only done his first report |
| #33 John[111729] |
| adsl-63-206-92-172.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Mistake he said he had done a recent report about it |
| #34 Executer[111730] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| katome: i havent even read a single one of 'Serious's reports |
| #35 ZerG~LinG[111733] |
| p423-054.ppp.get2net.dk |
| #34: Then i highly recommend it. |
| #36 Forever_Knight[111739] |
| 170.158.213.88 |
Executer is a moron. Why did Mark waste his time with this report when there are so many others worth commenting on? The world may never know.
-Forever_Knight |
| #37 Executer[111753] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| i would think a 6 year old would use a word like "moron", fucking newb |
| #38 |]agomar[111756] |
| StCatherines-ppp215512.sympatico.ca |
Executor, perhaps the best reports I'd suggest to read are:
-YRM's FFA brs ( both of them )
-Testosterone's 10 rated br
-Cynical Magician's 10 rated br |
| #39 Forever_Knight[111775] |
| 170.158.212.78 |
Whether or not a 6 year old can say the word "moron", it is still applicable to you. Moron.
-Forever_Knight |
| #40 CrackHeadJeb[111782] |
| mu-196078.dhcp.missouri.edu |
I am not too upset with battlereports written by inexperienced battlereporters that have a "raw" feel. As time passes, battlereporting experience will come to the dedicated battlereporter and help him/her obtain a certain professionalism.
But I am upset, however, with an obvious lack of effort in fixing formatting glitches. I hope that you didn't intend for the report to look like this. :(
-CHJ |
| #41 Executer[111803] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| dag, i read em. and they were good. but i like creating my own style thx. and forever_knight, please stop commenting if you have nothing better to say. thx gw. |
| #42 Executer[111805] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| btw, my favourite was Breeze's No Mercy |
| #43 USTaliWhacker[111950] |
| cdm-66-140-232-bate.cox-internet.com |
Good br man. Like everyone else said, white bar and grammar mistakes need to go, and u could use a couple less pics. But, other than that, it was good.
Also, #18 deserves a quote for:
"Well... my #1 suggestion is to not hit the print screen button like a spazz."
Perfect for quote status.. :P
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