| #1 NotDefault[112645] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
| 1st |
| #2 Ling-erie[112646] |
| proxy3.leeds.ac.uk |
that was ok...
but there's no such thing as a lort
and that game was too short
and use names, not colours to describe people |
| #3 NotDefault[112647] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
3rd and just read
5-6 probably
NotDefault |
| #4 aseq[112651] |
| eagle.ksa.fnt.hvu.nl |
-some spelling errors
-i hate it when ppl say "Zerg masses lings. Zerg sends his ten lings to assault on blues main." So massing lings means making at least 10? I understand what you mean, but i just don't like the way it's written...
-hehe, lorts, i first thought you meant lord...
6 |
| #5 funnymarx[112656] |
| dhcp085206.res-hall.northwestern.edu |
I shouldn't be awake now...
Oh, and I knew this was going to be bad when I saw that it was played on temple... :(
--funnymarx
"This is a demonstrator's model. I've been trying to make up my mind for years whether to buy this car." |
| #6 Keanu_Reaver[112657] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-28.sea.eschelon.com |
grammar mistakes everywhere
one part you said "teals 8 mutas beat blue's 1 corsair" or something like that, when the pic right next to it showed obviously 2 blue corsairs, things like that tend to stick out :(
4-5 |
| #7 psychochild[112660] |
| slip-32-102-238-157.fl.us.prserv.net |
| Wow. To hell with the D Key! We don't need no stinkin' D!.... But what the hell is a lort? I say 2. Bad grammar, somewhat average pics, and tedious writing. Now if I can improve on those, (Which I can't) then you can too! |
| #8 vincible[112662] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
| lort=zealot I think, though I have no clue where he got that abbreviation from. |
| #9 SuM12nV[112663] |
| 164.116.165.157 |
| Yo that was good for a 1st try but spend more then a half hour on these. um 4-5 |
| #10 SiG.[112664] |
| mia-this01.firn.edu |
lol.. This was like a 1 minute read...
the protoss player totally SUCKED it made me sick |
| #11 Mjotnar[112665] |
| eclipse.cntrvilhs.fcps.k12.va.us |
| This report wasn't to long or good. If I were a rater I wouldn't know what to rate this, so I'd have to give this a 1 (just to be on the safe side) |
| #12 KepowOb[112666] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp3468569.sympatico.ca |
The first sentence "Both players gather minerals blue sends a lord down towards 6'oclock. Teal goes overload on 8". How did blue send a lord when he is toss?
Those coppy sentences really got to me, just as #4 said. Next time read it over, or even better, have someone else who is really good in english read it over (including your computers spell check if you have word or something similar). |
| #13 IcE-Inforcer[112667] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
| Um.... zerg does this, zerg takes that, zerg makes those, zerg spends cash, zerg zergates... plz use he, and give the real payer names. Very short too. |
| #14 triped[112668] |
| 63.85.132.17 |
| This was extremely short, your picture layout fucked with the text too much, and overall your writing was crap. 3 |
#15  [112669] |
| user93.net181.fl.sprint-hsd.net |
| short, but not all bad. |
| #16 CrackHeadJeb[112671] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
| 2 |
| #17 MatriX[112672] |
| h000094c60a57.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| i didnt think the br had any personality or substance. it was just "zerg did this, protoss did this..." it was also short, there were some typos and sentences that made no sense.. i dont really think this was a 5. more like a 3 |
| #18 Adrenaling[112678] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| find a better game. if u want to report short games, report like, 3-5 games at once. find longer games. learn to spell. fic grammar. proof-read. there are many more to tell, but i dont feel like mentioning them. |
| #19 Puma[112717] |
| e1h2p47.scotland.net |
Ok, fair enough fist report, but still. I spend like 3hours on a text only, add real detail and get a 4.
You spend 20 mins, explain things in the most boring way possible (no depth) and still get a 5!
Or maybe im just bitter. |
| #20 Andris[112732] |
| spider-te054.proxy.aol.com |
Go kill yourself for you laziness u peice of shit
-Love, Andris
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| #21 DoobieSnacks[112744] |
| c-66-56-1-110.atl.client2.attbi.com |
| lort = HOF |
| #22 Black_Abyss[112748] |
| 2Cust22.tnt23.lax3.da.uu.net |
Bad grammar, bad game, bad... everything. and WTF is a lort?
I can see zealot ~ lort, but why is there an r? theres no r in zealot! IT ISN'T ZEALORT YOU FOOL! Blah, now I'm going to be pissed at this all day.
1, because I can't rate with negatives. |
| #23 x]tm[x[112749] |
| 1Cust170.tnt41.dfw9.da.uu.net |
I just liked this report cause it lead me to this comment
page which lead me to that new divvio quote that has a link
to his funny as hell rant about to backgroundcity.com to
poor napolionic. I give this a 10 just for that :D
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| #24 |]agomar[112839] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112514.sympatico.ca |
| lol, it's funny but it's not new ;) |
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