| #1 Mjotnar[112881] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
| first |
| #2 shampoo[112882] |
| 12-246-181-177.client.attbi.com |
| 2nd |
| #3 third[112883] |
| DIALUP-158-72.TNMEM2.USIT.NET |
| 3rd |
| #4 Adrenaling[112884] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| 4th |
| #5 Adrenaling[112885] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| i liked the pics. that was fine. but u got to describe things a lot better. im not sure if u wanted the pics to tell most of the story... but like i said, descriptions. there was on pic and u aligned some text next to it, but it was only like 2 lines of writing, when at least 10 lines could fit. so all im saying is to DESCRIBE things a whole lot better. |
| #6 Adrenaling[112886] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| btw, i wouldnt give this a 7 though. |
#7  [112891] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112458.sympatico.ca |
| I found the pictures bad, the action poorly described, and the report too short. You do show promise, but I'd have problems giving this gold! |
| #8 corpuschrist[112895] |
| www.waverly-shellrock.k12.ia.us |
| weeee short game |
| #9 Manius[112911] |
| adsl-81-164-252.asm.bellsouth.net |
| Coming from a non-report making person, I dunno if you'll want to listen. But...it seemed to me like you just wanted the report to end all of the sudden. It seemed like the game was going fine and BAM! There's the end. *shrug* BTW...to any who care, I'll probably be posting a fan-fic soon, so...prepare yourselves! |
| #10 reaqu[112923] |
| cache-1.lnh.md.webcache.rcn.net |
I have 2 agree with dag on this one, u do have better br's than most ppl on their 1st try=] keep it up!
7 |
| #11 Strief[112954] |
| fw54.torolab.ibm.com |
Better than much of the stuff on the site ... 6-7/10.
*Sigh* I wish the fanfic wasn't mixed in with the "real" battlereports like this one.
Heh Dagomar ... did you ever go to a bar called Gord's Place in St Catherine's?
s
1.2 |
| #12 Mr.Upnchup[113009] |
| adsl-63-200-49-220.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Needs more detail. |
| #13 ZerG~LinG[113139] |
| p431-015.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Needs to be longer, and details. |
| #14 dsafsfa[113144] |
| 54.210.33.65.cfl.rr.com |
| 14th |
| #15 Marx[114360] |
| ws43.phs.piedmont.k12.ca.us |
| U are supposed to make battle reports about GOOD games... |
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