| #1 Manius[112916] |
| adsl-81-164-252.asm.bellsouth.net |
| Well here's my attempt at a fan-fic. Tell me if I should keep writing or not. Sorry about that white box on the left that fuxxed everything up. If anyone knows how to fix that, please tell me how. Thanks. Hope you guys enjoy it. |
| #2 Yellow-Sn0w[112917] |
| ool-18ba74f2.dyn.optonline.net |
| 1st non-author |
| #3 Yellow-Sn0w[112918] |
| ool-18ba74f2.dyn.optonline.net |
| ahhhh white bar of death!@!, too short though,but not bad for first try. Try again without the bar and with a little more of a story. |
| #4 Adrenaling[112919] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| hi |
| #5 JadeMunkey[112920] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp3480059.sympatico.ca |
| Good first attempt, save for the white bar and length. I wouldn't mind reading more of it, just make sure there is more of it. |
| #6 AbsoluteGeneus[112921] |
| spider-tq031.proxy.aol.com |
white bar>you :D
i like white |
| #7 Manius[112922] |
| adsl-81-164-162.asm.bellsouth.net |
| Alright...I will make more...LOTS more. And...everyone's noticed the white line...does anyone know how to fix it? =D |
| #8 Amoeba_Boy[112925] |
| spider-wm023.proxy.aol.com |
| I'm pretty sure all you have to do is put <table td=600> at the begining and the white bars tyranny will cease |
| #9 BigD[112932] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
White bar was the best part ;).
Nice to see someone actually put a little effort into their fanfics (a bit of color). Story was only decent, but I'd read another one of yours easily. |
| #10 CorpusChrist[112946] |
| www.waverly-shellrock.k12.ia.us |
| Manus the hands of fate????? MST? |
| #11 zerg_aliance[112960] |
| spider-wo054.proxy.aol.com |
| love it |
| #12 IcE-Inforcer[112966] |
| proxy.sjc.marketscore.com |
| Not bad not bad... this one didnt suck as bad as mine and got a 4 too. Next time u should make some people die and fix that white thingy. ;) |
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