| #1 WrAth[114030] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
Well written, good description.
there's lack of creativity in the ending. it's too short to say anything else about it.
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| #2 vincible[114031] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
Thought it was ok. Really unsatisfying though--it was short and the ending was abrupt. A few spelling errors that you should have caught (lense??), a few grammar errors that you ought to have caught but were forgivable. So far it's kind of cliched but whatever. Anyway, it's got potential.
Of course I'm writing this at 4:45 AM so don't take me too seriously. |
| #3 vincible[114032] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
| In case my previous comment was too harsh, I think this was much better than the average fiction here. |
| #4 WrAth[114034] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
| oh it definitely is, no doubt about that. I'd like to see some more if you can put some time and effort into your ideas. |
| #5 Jekpo![114035] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
5th
Not bad |
| #6 AbsoluteGeneus[114040] |
| xstop2-ext.metrocon.com |
6th!
Hi! |
| #7 AbsoluteGeneus[114041] |
| xstop2-ext.metrocon.com |
| skools IP number=gay :) |
| #8 IcE-Inforcer[114054] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
Kinda short but still good. Like Wrath said you should put more time and thought into it and it should be worth more.
At least if ur gonna make a fanfic make it have somfin to do with BW or W3 or whatever.
Unless it's like this: ttp://www.battlereports.com/viewreports.php?reportnum=4761
:)
Sorry bout screwup with other br. |
| #9 Adrenaling[114059] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
hi. i dont want to read, so u wont get a reasonable comment from me. i dont read fics. except maybe Praetor's Phoenix Legion.
=] |
| #10 Sexy^Orangutang[114103] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
fanfics are gay |
| #11 Puma[114127] |
| 216-55-164-139.dsl.san-diego.abac.net |
Well the thing is that after I wrote it I kinda...stopped. Pissed me off but everythng I could think of to continue it kinda sucked. I was supposed to be a prologue to a larger story but as I said, them damn creative juices stopped flowing. And it was a WC3 fanfic. You should read up on that game more!
ps - skools ip #? Was that for me? I don't get it, I posted this from my home computer off of my family's network. |
| #12 IcE-Inforcer[114187] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
Family network, how beautiful.
They rock though when u have ur friendz over and make a LAN tournament lol, kick ass. |
| #13 Puma[114497] |
| e1h1p113.scotland.net |
| HEY!!! You stole my name man! |
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