| #1 Adrenaling[114406] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| hihihiho |
| #2 Keanu_Reaver[114407] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-184.sea.eschelon.com |
sorry for taking so long to get this one written up, a certain someone has been occupying alot of my time *cough* :)
anyway, hope you all enjoy reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it |
| #3 Adrenaling[114408] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
hi keanu. r u psyonic? ;]
thisll prolly get gold too. i dunno. i havent read it yet, but seeing how most of your others were gold, maybe this one too. i dunno. ;]
a few more golds and youll have that 8.0000 rookmark. ;] |
| #4 Keanu_Reaver[114409] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-184.sea.eschelon.com |
| I'm hoping :) |
| #5 IcE-Inforcer[114413] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
See people! It's not ahrd to throw in some damn HTML. Makes it wayyy nicer.
Now to read :). |
| #6 Swiss_Mercenary[114419] |
| h24-76-50-216.vf.shawcable.net |
| Skimmed over it, but quite good. Much better then the other Fan-Fics. |
| #7 SplaSh(2[114421] |
| spider-ntc-td082.proxy.aol.com |
| #7 YAY AYAY AYA now i'll read it (highest post ever for me) |
| #8 Mr.Mediocre[114426] |
| 149.149.205.38 |
| I really look forward to these keanu, good work! |
| #9 MoebiusX[114427] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
A certain someone? You know, most religions back in the day would chop off their right hand for doing that kinda stuff if you catch my drift ;).
I'm certain this is another gold story, despite the fact I haven't read it. I keep intending to read your stories from start to finish but that certain someone occupies my time, too. |
| #10 hello[114428] |
| c-24-245-64-22.mn.client2.attbi.com |
my right hand takes up a lot of my time too
-scn |
| #11 IcE-Inforcer[114448] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
I read it. Gooood jooooob. OMG where's James going... plz hurry and write the rest, thank you.
Gold 4 sure. |
| #12 Apollo[L][114450] |
| 54.210.33.65.cfl.rr.com |
FANFICS SUCK ASSHOLE
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| #13 Amoeba_Boy[114474] |
| spider-wm021.proxy.aol.com |
Did you even read it
Anyways, keanu, your fanfics continue to own. I swearr anytime you post something you raise the wierdness level of this site, but o well.
I shall continue my quest for gold on my fanfic.
P.S. How long do you plan on making this thing |
| #14 UltimateFire[114478] |
| spider-ntc-tb081.proxy.aol.com |
| Hey man, Nice job. Very good introduction of mass intrigue and paranoia. I love it. |
| #15 [114486] |
| sdn-ar-010casfrMP142.dialsprint.net |
oooohhh geez you're killin me here flash; wouldya hurry up and come out with the next one already?? what's up with this "project vedetta"? and where's james off to?? and why are there people who "look a lot like kelvena," and "look a lot like kane"??? aaaaaaaaaaaah!! so many questions unanswered!!
hehe great job flash, ingtriguing as always, and extremely well written, can't wait for the next one =)
"a certain someone" been takin up your time, hmm? geez flash how many times do i have to tell you to stop spending time with your barbie doll?! she's not real!! *sigh* i'm startin to worry about you flash *cough* |
| #16 stardust8297[114487] |
| sdn-ar-010casfrMP142.dialsprint.net |
| forgot to put my name, lol |
| #17 Keanu_Reaver[114489] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-110.sea.eschelon.com |
funny girl star ;) funny girl
and i got that interview ready, get on aim please ;) |
| #18 SiG.[114491] |
| host-216-77-217-166.fll.bellsouth.net |
Flash?
Heh.. Keanu, as always I totaly LOVED this fic.
I dont know why you made me suffer so much by taking so long to get it out :(
So Kelvana looks like Reiwen, So Reiwen must have resurrected herself in Kelvana somehow.. James isn't a terran.. and I'm guessing when he had his first dream he was near the lab where that demon suit was made, and the second time he was where it was buried.. Curious.. Kane is immortal? What is this primitive city? Mt. Zion? GOD THE SUSPENSE!!!!!!!
gold
8
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#19  [114505] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517256.sympatico.ca |
clear concise writing with some highly effective adjectives, good visual images at times, and a great storyline. 8.
Keanu is da man ;). |
| #20 [114506] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517256.sympatico.ca |
| oh, but btw, you gotta cut down on some little mistakes ( ie. Jame's awakening, sun SHONE bright ( not shown ). Otherwise, as I said, great job! |
| #21 Keanu_Reaver[114507] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-166.sea.eschelon.com |
| ahh, thanks dag, grammar has never been my thing ;) |
| #22 stardust8297[114529] |
| sdn-ar-016casfrMP068.dialsprint.net |
| i think james' awakening is correct... |
| #23 Keanu_Reaver[114541] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-228.sea.eschelon.com |
nah, the end i said "the sun shown brightly" when james was having the flashback of kane and reiwen finding a place to burry the machine :P
but yeah, you are WRONG dag! its James'! not jame's! *dances with star* |
| #24 stardust8297[114542] |
| sdn-ar-015casfrMP119.dialsprint.net |
| =) |
| #25 Dopey[114553] |
| aegis.itc.gu.edu.au |
| LoL @ "Xanir intelligently said" :P. |
| #26 Dopey[114555] |
| aegis.itc.gu.edu.au |
Oh yeah , Dagomar , in case you didnt read it in micks reply section..
what has micks skill level in starcraft got to do with my speaking, thinking , writing or intelligence? that was dumb.. sorry, but your dumb, I realise dumb is someone who cant talk, but usually people use it to say how stupid someone is, and your really stupid :P , nuff said? |
| #27 [114629] |
| St-Catherines-ppp126413.sympatico.ca |
Dopey . . . don't write a comment illustrating your own stupidity in which you call someone dumb.
"sorry, but your dumb, I realise dumb is someone who cant talk, but usually people use it to say how stupid someone is"
Anyway, IT IS Jame's ;( |
| #28 [114631] |
| St-Catherines-ppp126413.sympatico.ca |
| asdf. n/m the James thing :P |
| #29 stardust8297[114644] |
| sdn-ar-013casfrMP020.dialsprint.net |
| lol =P |
| #30 Kane[115439] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| omg i'm in a fanfic! |
| #31 enaK[118319] |
| sdn-ar-019casfrMP201.dialsprint.net |
| !cifnaf a ni m'i gmo |
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