| #1 saiyin999[114866] |
| cvg-65-27-225-224.cinci.rr.com |
| first |
| #2 Amoeba_Boy[114867] |
| spider-tp064.proxy.aol.com |
If your gonna steal first at least put something useful in the comment
1st non author |
| #3 UltimateFire[114871] |
| spider-ntc-tc024.proxy.aol.com |
2nd
My suggestion (it counts for nothing but im trying to be helpful) is get a better game to report or "embellish" the game to make it more back and forth. That game seemed awfully one sided to me. |
| #4 Jekpo![114872] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
3rd ON A SAIYIN REPORT
WOOOOO
ban |
| #5 Amoeba_Boy[114873] |
| spider-tp064.proxy.aol.com |
Yeah, pretty good for your first. Make the text white on black bg, softer on the eyes.
I think for your first few reports you should write about pros, there are some great boxer reps in the replay section of this site. You won't get things like the above. |
| #6 Amoeba_Boy[114874] |
| spider-tp064.proxy.aol.com |
when I say above I mean the third comment, jepko wasnt here wehn I was writing.
And what do you mean ban, its his first and not that bad for a first too. He shouldn't be banned |
| #7 Black_Abyss[114875] |
| 1Cust168.tnt44.lax7.da.uu.net |
I thought carriers WERE turds. Big, fat, flying turds that launch little turdlets at you from afar! Anyway, this is nice for a first BR, I agree with what Amoeba said.
6
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| #8 Jekpo![114876] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
| It's just a cool word. like fucktard |
| #9 User14[114878] |
| spider-ntc-ta031.proxy.aol.com |
i didn't read it
i give it a 8 |
| #10 Adrenaling[114880] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| oooooo, i like the PRETTY colors. |
| #11 Adrenaling[114885] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| btw, it isnt good talking in one tense in the first actual game paragraph then switching right in the middle. i dont like it. if ur sticking to first-person, then stick to it, if ur going third person, then stick to it. |
| #12 Freque[114890] |
| sdn-ap-014caburbP1501.dialsprint.net |
nice first try. Like Amoeba said, try a black background with white text and throw a few pictures in there, even if all you have is MS Paint
6 |
| #13 pi[114894] |
| adsl-63-200-49-143.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
Do black on white. Make puuurrrrdy pictures. Br good games. Write all good and stuff.
Goodness gracious. |
| #14 BigD[114900] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
Great for a first attempt, since you put some color in and (what a shocker) used paragraphs! I'd give you 10 just for that, but I'm not a rater.
Be more specific with your lessons learned if you're going to do them. I can say those two things for pretty much all my games, but if you do them well enough to win you take them and go home. |
| #15 saiyin999[114912] |
| cvg-65-27-225-224.cinci.rr.com |
| Hey guys, thanx for all these suggestions. |
| #16 Shepherd[114915] |
| res104a-011.rh.rit.edu |
"The 12 fully loaded carriers with all upgrades start blowing up everything in sight at saiyin's large island expansion. saiyin decides to make scourge from 6 hatcheries. eventually, after all the carriers are finally defeated, the island expansion lay in ruins. With no money left and almost no units, piggy concedes the game."
er....there's something huge missing from this paragraph. I was like, WTF? I suggest that you be more descriptive of what is exactly is going on in there. Was hydras with scourges? Did you just beat them with scourges? What?
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| #17 Mr.Syco[114919] |
| spider-wk062.proxy.aol.com |
| Put some thought into your comments Jekpo! instead of being an idiot and saying ban. |
| #18 IcE-Inforcer[114927] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
17-That reminds me.
Jekpo=Ban
All he does is wander around, complain, give shit, flame.
Doesn't even br. When a good report comes out, all he says is: ''Godj ob.'' Nice and constructive don't u think.
I remember when I wuz newb on this site he flamed every single thing I would put up.
And Jekpo, if ur gonna insult me don't call me a newb, u already did that a few dozen times.
Nice for first. |
| #19 Redemption6[114930] |
| 209-6-250-32.c3-0.lex-ubr2.sbo-lex.ma.cable.rcn.com |
| Nice first i guess, good that you gave an attempt at using some html..unlike some other first ive seen. The game is awfully one-sided because you had like 4 exs to his 2. Arent toss supposed to be better on islands than zergs? anyways wuz with the "999" stuff? Grammer and punctuation could be worked on. "5" |
| #20 saiyin999[114954] |
| cvg-65-27-225-224.cinci.rr.com |
| Hey guys, how do you get a black background anyway? |
| #21 Amoeba_Boy[114957] |
| spider-wj022.proxy.aol.com |
<td bgcolor=black>
Put that at the top, before you start writing. Than just change text to white |
| #22 CrackHeadJeb[114958] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
On another page, background colour can be changed in either a body or table tag. Here, you have to change it in the table tag though. If you put it in a body tag like so:
<BODY BGCOLOR=black>
...then this setting will NOT override the previous body tag on the page. (on a side note, you can change vLink, aLink, link colours in here)
So to change the background you must encapsulate your report in a table:
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| #23 CrackHeadJeb[114960] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Amoeba_Boy's suggestion looks 10 times easier, try that first unless you're doing something fancy.
-CHJ |
| #24 CrackHeadJeb[114961] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
er, you can't put it in the body tag because something else overrides it. I'll stop spamming this comment section, you just can't put bgcolor in a body tag here (I don't think)
-CHJ |
| #25 UltimateFire[114966] |
| spider-ntc-td072.proxy.aol.com |
| CHJ for rater/god/comment whore 8^O. |
| #26 Amoeba_Boy[114967] |
| spider-wj022.proxy.aol.com |
| Hes going for the triple crown |
| #27 Jekpo![114976] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
| ICE you're still a newbie cunt hair. You're too god damn retarded to figure out when I say "I said ban because I could not because I was serious" you fucking inbred mountain hick. Why don't you go wack off with KoH-Leifoh you fucking perma virgin |
| #28 Adrenaling[114981] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
ice, plz, dont act like a 10 year old. u write like one too.
ban.
=] |
#29  [114993] |
| StCatherines-ppp109109.sympatico.ca |
| Alright attempt, some big errors, of course, rated a 6. |
| #30 Redemption6[115021] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| lol how bout no flaming? |
| #31 ZerG~LinG[115022] |
| p406-072.ppp.get2net.dk |
Resonable br. 5-6.
And btw, i owuld now like to present u the basic of br'ing:
"Do black on white. Make puuurrrrdy pictures. Br good games. Write all good and stuff. " -pi
Now thats gosu. |
| #32 IcE-Inforcer[115051] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
Thing is, I am 10.
How come was I able to predict he would call me a newb?
You made me cry adrenaling! Dang you! I hate you now! Ill tell santa not to bring you anything! |
| #33 SFI_CBPye[115774] |
| 167.196.244.7 |
| Nice report. Wish my bro was into SC... we've been playing UT for over a year now. |
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