| #1 ZaN[114905] |
| spider-ntc-tc082.proxy.aol.com |
| what a gosu game furious u are one sexy player :) keep up the goodwork in gamei hope you reach ur ladder score goal good luck ~_~ have fun :) |
| #2 NotDefault[114906] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
I liked that. Still, correct grammar and spelling do wonders for text-only reports. For example, I saw a comma used in place of a period, which looks very, very bad, and "seen" used in place of "scene."
Just don't do that :(.
NotDefault |
| #3 Furious[114907] |
| bal-ts2-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| I suck at all things english, anyone wanna be my proof reader? |
| #4 Ling-erie[114910] |
| proxy2.leeds.ac.uk |
| god report =] |
| #5 l)‡rl{.Ò‡p…[114911] |
| spider-syd-aa013.proxy.aol.com |
Nice report furious ^^
That sounded like a close game, gj.
If u did make any spelling mistakes, they arent too serious b/c i didnt c them.
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| #6 pi[114917] |
| adsl-63-200-49-143.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| I saw a few spelling/grammar mistakes. |
| #7 Fighterdoken[114920] |
| 207-246-168-200.wiu.edu |
| Another awesome BR from an awesome player. Good job, Furious. Kick some butt on gamei! |
| #8 stonecoldnewbie[114921] |
| c-24-245-64-22.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| 8th yo!@#!@! |
| #9 Freque[114922] |
| sdn-ap-005caburbP2002.dialsprint.net |
Nice report, Furious. Like other have said there were a few grammar mistakes and also at one point you said something like "we faught 'til there were only a few goons left on either side" I guess I personally would have like a little more detail, but awesome text only and close game!
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| #10 vincible[114924] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
I liked it.
Of course there were grammar/spelling errors. For example the title: "Im" instead of "I'm", and in the first sentence there are two more blatant errors. I'm not going to go further than that. You do need a proof-reader.
What is "the rec of a newbie-basher"? |
| #11 dan[114925] |
| spider-loh-td071.proxy.aol.com |
11th
good to have u back br-ing furious
read later |
| #12 HarvKilljoy[114926] |
| 192.189.112.134 |
Furious,
Good to see folks still willing, and able, I might add, to do an all-text report. I would like to volunteer to be your proof reader; look for me here or on B-Net on the weekends.
I for one like to see someone detail-minded enough to show the build order without it looking like a grocery list, tell us about the 'goon battle in just enough detail to whet our appetites, and not bore us to tears. Kudos to you, Furious.
On another topic, I would like to offer up a challenge, to a 1v1 or other match-up ladder-style, you and I. I do not play ladder enough to even have a record =( but I am aiming to change all that. I seek simply to learn the game and find others with similar tastes and skill.
In closing, again, I wish to volunteer for your proof-reader, and to put forth my challenge to a ladder match, just for fun. I look forward to hearing from you; again, congradulations on your battle report.
HARV |
| #13 Redemption6[114932] |
| 209-6-250-32.c3-0.lex-ubr2.sbo-lex.ma.cable.rcn.com |
| nice report but there were a handful of grammer errors. Err make it flow better and be funnier to entertain the reader and not just go through the lines of the game. Besides that i guess itz okay. Nice JoB! "6-8" |
| #14 Megaman X[114938] |
| pool-141-154-224-42.bos.east.verizon.net |
| awww u totally kick my @$$ in starcraft... |
| #15 FM_Moltke[114949] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| A battlereport ? Where's the pictures? |
| #16 Amoeba_Boy[114964] |
| spider-wj022.proxy.aol.com |
"A battlereport ? Where's the pictures?"
Truley amazing. Ever heard of text only? He said he was doing that in the very begining |
| #17 Chingachgook[114972] |
| moore.ti.telenor.net |
| Nice br Fur :) |
| #18 Jekpo![114977] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
| Gamei games are cool ... good report |
| #19 Furious[114986] |
| bal-ts3-2500.tpgi.com.au |
Do you use AIM harv?
If so contact me at "Furious 2069" without the quotes.
I can never proof read my own works, i guess its because i think the same way as I read it and make the same mistakes again :/
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| #20 NotDefault[114992] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
Furious, I think everyone's that way :). Then again, if I write something in the middle of the night, it doesn't hurt to check it over when I'm more awake...
Oh, and to clarify, I liked the report quite a bit, despite the grammar/spelling errors. :)
NotDefault |
| #21 HarvKilljoy[115004] |
| 192.189.112.134 |
Furious,
Sorry, don't use AIM as I don't know what it is, unless it's some messenger program. By the way, I'm using a work computer and cannot download to this box but I will notify you when I'm using my own PC. Drop me a line at phaedrus89@yahoo.com and I'll proofread for ye, lad. Again, good report.
HARV
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| #22 Chill_Factor[115006] |
| adsl-64-164-9-168.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Good report fur, cheers to you. I don't really have any comments, seeing as it was entertaining and descriptive... |
| #23 ZerG~LinG[115025] |
| p406-072.ppp.get2net.dk |
Nice text only, alot like mark4's which is a very positive thing.
Its obvious to see that you have skill, and I look forward to your next gamei adventures.
Oh, and if u ever see mark4, and i'm on plz msg, cuz i wanna obs ;)
Great report, 7.5 (i'm sure Dag will give it a 8 before too long ;) |
| #24 FM_Moltke[115026] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
"Truley amazing. Ever heard of text only? He said he was doing that in the very begining "
Truely amazing. Ever heard of sarcasm? : / |
| #25 Furious[115042] |
| bal-ts3-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| Wow thx for all the kind words everybody, I really appreciate it! |
| #26 fucktard[115150] |
| 177.ippool.xville.multipro.com |
| good, but im sick of reports without pictures... |
| #27 Puma5000[115516] |
| 216-55-164-139.dsl.san-diego.abac.net |
| No pretty pretty pictures!? Piccies piccies piccies! Me wanna my piccies! |
| #28 l)‡rl{.—‡p…[115593] |
| spider-syd-aa034.proxy.aol.com |
| i dont know why u guyz r complaining about pics, he thought he's try something new, and he did it beautifully i might add. |
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