| #1 Blaaaargh[115474] |
| 220-52-189-66.wo.cpe.charter-ne.com |
Pics dont work?
1st. |
| #2 Eyeglazer[115475] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
| Bah, I noticed that right away. Correcting it right now. |
| #3 Eyeglazer[115476] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
| Pics should be fixed now. Not sure how to add spacing between the text/pics and the border of the table, though. Working on it. (first time I've done this, natch) |
| #4 Jekpo![115477] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
| Wow...great first report. 8 |
| #5 Eyeglazer[115478] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
Damn, five minutes since I posted it and two people read it already? What do you people do all day? ;)
Seriously, though, thanks. |
| #6 AbsoluteGeneus[115479] |
| spider-tq024.proxy.aol.com |
Not much Eyeglazer :D
Great Job!! Instant gold!
Liked the dead goon collage background on one of the pics. |
#7  [115480] |
| Montreal-ppp47854.qc.sympatico.ca |
Very good br indeed! Especially for a first. The pictures were quite nice and so was the text ;). Great job again. The writing was a bit dry in places, and things like this:
"They [two enemy probes] were summarily executed for insubordination by one of my shiny-new zealots." ( members of another army can't be insubordinate to you )
Didn't help. Other than that, it was very descriptive and helped me follow the action well. Easy 8. |
| #8 Adrenaling[115481] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| VERY nice first report. better than the crap weve been seeing lately. |
| #9 Eyeglazer[115484] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
6: That collage looked better in PNG, but pngs don't appear in IE4. :( (which presumably most 9x users are still using)
7: The dryness has a bit of a tale to it. I'm used to writing epic fantasy. ;) I figured melodrama wouldn't go over well in a BR, though, so I was going out of my way to avoid it. I probably just went a little too far in that direction. :(
8: Having read the last few, that's not saying much. ;) Thanks though. |
| #10 Eyeglazer[115485] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
| Addendum to 7: the insubordination bit was a pure grade A oopsie, though. ;) |
| #11 Freque[115486] |
| sdn-ap-005caburbP0919.dialsprint.net |
| Eyeglazer: Coment Whore 2002 |
| #12 Eyeglazer[115488] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
| 11: *grand bow* |
| #13 Freque[115489] |
| sdn-ap-005caburbP0919.dialsprint.net |
| You have half of all the comments!! =) |
| #14 Mistears[115490] |
| cpe-24-31-39-161.socal.rr.com |
this was good.
good nicknames in the beginning to
give us an idea of what to expect |
| #15 [115493] |
| Montreal-ppp47854.qc.sympatico.ca |
| Eye, yeah, same here ;). I'm used to writing the same stuff, which is why I often resort to that style in my brs. |
| #16 Adrenaling[115494] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| eye, i meant the crappy text-onlies. the fan-fiction aint bad so far and dag's report was exceptional. |
| #17 Eyeglazer[115495] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
| Ling: yeah, I know that was what you meant. Sorry if that didn't come across. I didn't read the fanfiction (SC fiction never seems to float my boat for some reason, which is weird), <rater asskissing> but Dag's report ruled. ;) </rak> |
| #18 UltimateFire[115498] |
| spider-ntc-td064.proxy.aol.com |
| Chocalaty reporting goodness! make more, ty. |
| #19 BigD[115500] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| Great for a first time effort, if it was one. First time BRers, pay attention. |
| #20 Zavael[115502] |
| ip68-97-14-146.ok.ok.cox.net |
PvPvPvP? Gaaaaaay =D
I give it 7-8 |
| #21 stonecoldnewbie[115504] |
| c-24-245-64-22.mn.client2.attbi.com |
hi
cool pics and above average writing especially for a br virgin, make more (involve less toss next time please)
8
^_________________________________________^! |
| #22 Eyeglazer[115505] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
| 20&21: Yeah, I kinda figured that 4xP was a mistake when I was about halfway through, hence the comment in the lessons learned. ;) No way I was throwing all that effort away, though, and it seems to have turned out all right anyway. |
| #23 Casper...[115519] |
| spc-isp-tor-58-19-600.sprint.ca |
good writing
average pics
bad players
have a nice day |
| #24 Critique[115525] |
| 170.211.34.51 |
| best since dags report i'll give u that much 8.5 |
| #25 Kane[115528] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| this report ownt -_- |
| #26 wynr[115546] |
| neptune.cohr.com |
| Good Job man. I found it very entertaining and easy to follow (which is rare). Keep up the good work. |
| #27 KepowOb[115553] |
| 198.168.103.207 |
| I really liked this. Next time get someone or several people to read it over for errors if you didn't this time, because I found some (or I just didnt understand the words you were using, thats a possibility). Either way, for a first it was pretty good. Keep up the good work! |
| #28 |||l||||ll|||||[115567] |
| cdm-66-5-84-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| nice |
| #29 Kane[115573] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| I espically liked this report because I actually knew what was happening. It's hard to describe the action in a 4ffa (I tried and I failed) so nice job. This report is one of the clearest and easiest-to-read since Fractal's Single-0 (or whatever it was called.) |
| #30 Puma5000[115591] |
| 216-55-164-139.dsl.san-diego.abac.net |
| Awesom report. Heheh, especially that alt text. imho if a report doesn't have humor it just isn't a good report |
| #31 ZerG~LinG[115607] |
| p443-59.ppp.get2net.dk |
Great first, makes my first look like horse crap...
Your text is ok, but I would prefer it a bit shorter -.- Don't ask
Four protoss is not only gay, but hard to follow, since everyone is using the same peons! *cough*
I liked ur <rak> tag, and the alt-text ;)
8, straight yo |
| #32 Long_Patrol[115637] |
| 80.226.27.24.cfl.rr.com |
To tell you the truth..i didnt read it
Long
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| #33 TM[115750] |
| 1Cust134.tnt52.dfw5.da.uu.net |
"Initial Warning: if you're viewing this over the archaism known as dialup, your modem is about to be anally violated with a claw hammer. Please bend over at this time."
That sould be quoted. |
| #34 Eyeglazer[115815] |
| 235-242.resnet.sunysb.edu |
| <small bow> Probably too late for anyone of import to see that suggestion now, but thanks anyway. ;) |
| #35 Jolly_pyrophile (Highschool ip tag)[115994] |
| sys-216.114.73.201.primarynetwork.com |
your report was pretty good. to good. your made all the pictures really fancy, and i was wondering what time do u have in your life? Also, did u just snap your photos with a digital camera, or did u use some software to capture the images from your replay?
-Jolly
()xxx()=======>
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| #36 Jolly_Pyrophile[115995] |
| sys-216.114.73.201.primarynetwork.com |
| o yeah, and how do u get shit quoted here? |
| #37 CaughtNaked[116047] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
eh, id say solid 8
ps. stonecoldnewbie sweats satanscookies!! :D |
| #38 Twip[116054] |
| 0-1pool196-96.nas6.columbus1.oh.us.da.qwest.net |
I like your style. :)
A note of advice concerning your darchons, though: FEEDBACK THE ENEMY'S WITH YOURS. That is all. :D |
| #39 Flaming_Snowman[133661] |
| px2wh.vc.shawcable.net |
Great report
i like some of the humour that comes up when you hang the cursor over the pictures, especially the rabid, man-eating, security armadilo part |
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