| #1 Please....[117039] |
| 180-30-189-66.wo.cpe.charter-ne.com |
| For the sake of my gangrene-infested grandmother, please learn the highly skilled yet feasable art of paragraph breaks. Too bundled to read; need's enough emprovement to kill a small elephant. And pics are VERY easy to make, they dont have to look amazing but informitave. And if you're gonna be funny, be funny. lame jokes = bad report. |
| #2 Elven-Pr0be[117041] |
| 12-221-146-40.client.insightBB.com |
| Thx for the suggestions. Sorry about lack of pics, I have no html skills. LOL, epoch thought i was funny... |
| #3 mistears[117046] |
| cpe-24-31-39-161.socal.rr.com |
| there is nobodyto thank. |
| #4 ImperatorP[117051] |
| h002078ccd7eb.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| oh yeah, if you dont want to use paragraphs and images then don't bother writing crappy 10 line brs with no detail whatsoever. |
| #5 ImperatorP[117052] |
| h002078ccd7eb.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| oh yah, 2 |
| #6 Elven-Pr0be[117055] |
| 12-221-146-40.client.insightBB.com |
| Sorry bout that just read some help and I have a new report with paragraphs and colored text. Still no pics sorry. Maybe it will get a 5 :) |
| #7 SFI_CBPye[117066] |
| jspmod1-67.accessatc.net |
Better luck next time.
Hey, you might do better than 2. My one-pic BR got a 5.
although now I'm starting to understand why the community is complaining about crap reports. Maybe epoch would do a BR of a 1v1 between us? I still suck. |
| #8 Epoch[117118] |
| ool-182f0cf0.dyn.optonline.net |
Elven, have u ever heard of the breakline tag? (It was explained earlier, USE IT FOOL!)
I guess I am popularizing and I am on a 2 game winning streak. =D
Now I am going to rate this, competely impersonally.
Pictures: -NA-
Funny Dialogue: 3
Writing: 4
Layout: 1
Overall: 2 1/3 XP |
#9  [117131] |
| StCatherines-ppp109190.sympatico.ca |
2 ;).
You have some potential hidden in that bundle of text, but please, next time:
a) report better players
b) use paragraphs
c) use pictures
d) use HTML
e) Make it WAYYYY longer
Just refer to the guides for help. |
| #10 I-LoveStarCraft[117210] |
| 24-241-187-40.hsacorp.net |
OOOOoooOOOoo take that Epoch
The writing was (insert explitive)
The humor was (" ")
The pics were great, unfortunately those are BR.com signature pics.
The strat was funny, but you could have written, "Epoch made 25 guards and 18 devs and destroyed the other guy w00t" and it would've been just as good. The point is (I always forget to state that damn thing), use more detail about battles and build orders, inform us on upgrades, and expansions more fully. The standard for BRs has risen significantly, especially with the addition of the replay feature.
My first and second text only got 5 apiece. I think they were so long that the raters never actually read them, and just said "awww fuck, it's 100+ lines, I'll just throw him a fin"
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