| #1 Kane[119418] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| Spell-checking this was a pain. Every time it came across Banon, it immediately suggested "Bunion." |
| #2 Coolin[119419] |
| h24-86-146-23.ed.shawcable.net |
| First non-author |
| #3 DNAisLife[119421] |
| ip68-4-29-43.pv.oc.cox.net |
| 2nd non-author |
| #4 Kane[119422] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| and no that url didn't get cut off |
| #5 funnymarx[119423] |
| dhcp085206.res-hall.northwestern.edu |
!!!
great diversion from finals :)
--funnymarx
"Smoking some meat?" |
| #6 Black_Abyss[119426] |
| 01-128.057.popsite.net |
| I love it more and more every time it continues. |
| #7 elemental(i2)[119427] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
| GG 5 AM posting time :[ |
| #8 Ruski[119430] |
| proxy.txc.net.au |
i like all your other parts but frankly i thought this was crap
i would have given it a 5 |
| #9 adrenaling[119440] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| hi kane, great job yet again. |
| #10 Sovereignty[119452] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
| Kane, this would be so much easier to read if you indented. I kept losing my spot. GJ again though in any case. |
| #11 Kane[119454] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| Ruski, who the hell are you |
#12  [119457] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112467.sympatico.ca |
very nice, there were some bits which were slightly awkward, and even some things like "A passengerless 747" seemed a little off ( an empty 747 would be better ). On the whole I liked this alot.
Make em a tad longer next time, too ;). 8. |
| #13 Psychochild[119459] |
| 35.orlando-21-22rs.fl.dial-access.att.net |
| What is the ideal length of a story anyways? 4 pages? Cause everytime I write it can get pretty long.. My current record is 48+pages. I have no life. This story was good, but I keep getting lost in the conversations because of the way its all smashed together. Paragraphs are a pain too. I guess an 8, but at least indent or space better. |
| #14 Kane[119463] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
4 page story is a bit short.
Each installment is 6-10 pages with 1.5 spacing and a pretty large font. (I don't use 14 point though, that's cheating.) So I've probably submitted about 50-60 pages total so far. |
| #15 adrenaling[119486] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| roflz kane, is ur rookmark gonna stay at 8.0000000 forever? |
| #16 RockForce[119495] |
| spider-mtc-tj031.proxy.aol.com |
| Spellcheck with 'Skip All' owns. =) |
| #17 ThePalisade[119514] |
| 170.158.213.70 |
| I would suggest spaces between paragraphs. It makes it easier to read. 9 =[ I guess no one else caught the subtle nuances that I did, this was by far the best installment. |
| #18 ZerG~LinG[119539] |
| p437-093.ppp.get2net.dk |
I just read the entire story from the start, what can i say?
OMFG OWNZ?
B.net words don't justify how good this fanfic is^^
Can't wait for the next! |
| #19 Roaddog[119550] |
| CPE00105cae268e.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| There is no emoticon available expressing my feeling towards this. |
| #20 IcE-Dark_Lord[119552] |
| 31.PPP.NBY1.enoreo.on.ca |
| not bad but i would have givven it a 7 |
| #21 IcE-Dark_Lord[119553] |
| 31.PPP.NBY1.enoreo.on.ca |
given* :(
god i suck at spelling
I blame this on my fat fingers....hehehe |
| #22 ZerG~LinG[119702] |
| p457-39.ppp.get2net.dk |
Kane rules.
This is almost as good as Preator. |
| #23 IcE-Dark_Lord[119705] |
| 10.PPP.NBY1.enoreo.on.ca |
| You say that you must prepare for the end and that its coming... May I be so bold to ask... wtf do you do to prepare for the end of a story??? |
| #24 Kane[119721] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| #24, you prepare for the end of a story by actually reading the beginning. Maybe then you'd understand it. |
| #25 [119764] |
| StCatherines-ppp109169.sympatico.ca |
| rofl kane. Personally I think these are the best fics ever written here, since they aren't SC based. |
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