| #1 EldritchEvil[121964] |
| nr11-216-196-185-12.fuse.net |
I'm sorry I had to post FOUR TIMES to get it to work. Please delete those.
-EldritchEvil |
| #2 ZerG~LinG[121965] |
| p429-067.ppp.get2net.dk |
Ok dude, you might take the reporting title away from dag if this continues :)
Anyway wub, but no wub to constant stories, I can only handle like 2 at a time :( |
| #3 ZerG~LinG[121966] |
| p429-067.ppp.get2net.dk |
| And 1st non-author btw |
| #4 Ender[121967] |
| 24-168-119-122.si.rr.com |
| 2nd |
| #5 spall[121968] |
| mv1-24.217.56.36.charter-stl.com |
| third |
| #6 Redemption6[121969] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| Interesting, make more. Prolly a 6-7. |
#7  [121976] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112419.sympatico.ca |
| Somehow this entertained me. Probably because it didn't buy into accepted cliches as much as most work. The story got better near the end, though sentences laden with errors ( ie. "his mind wandered furthur and furthur down the corridors of his mind" - you mention mind twice while mispelling farther ) meant it wouldn't get gold. GW :) |
| #8 Epoch[121977] |
| ool-182f0edb.dyn.optonline.net |
GW Evil, keep it up ^^
In the mean time, I'll go off and find something worth BRing... |
| #9 SoM[121988] |
| 61.170.212.216 |
What is with all these "novellas," fan-fics, and short stories? Not complaining, but they out-number br's about 3:1 lately. Hummmm..
Entertaining however, with a few errors...nothing to prejudice however.
GW.
SoM_WumpscuT |
| #10 Link_of_Shadow[122004] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
Ok! Good! Like it!
GW!
Continue. please... |
| #11 EldritchEvil[122016] |
| nr11-66-161-173-195.fuse.net |
| Thanks for the commments and the advice. |
| #12 Snow_fox98_SD[122560] |
| 203-109-203-97.nzl.ihugultra.co.nz |
| Lame story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| #13 pizza66red[122561] |
| 203-109-203-97.nzl.ihugultra.co.nz |
| This site like totally sucks dude! the story sucks vand all the rest. up yours dude. tata!!!!!!!! |
| #14 MiSt[122880] |
| dsl092-169-187.wdc1.dsl.speakeasy.net |
| Actually I thought it was entertaining. |
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