| #1 Vigilant[122720] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| Comments? Post! |
| #2 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[122722] |
| atiy44hsy452e.ab.hsia.telus.net |
| 1st Non author weeeeee its to easy now. |
| #3 Vigilant[122723] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| I hate you. |
| #4 Vigilant[122724] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| No raters have graced either installment of my fanfic. Perhaps awaiting conclusion? |
| #5 ThePalisade[122725] |
| s41.dial1.pro.nac.net |
I didn't read these. I have two reasons:
1) You disrespected yourself enough to call this a fanfic.
2) You posted the second installment two seconds after you posted the first one. So much for suspense. |
| #6 ThePalisade[122727] |
| s41.dial1.pro.nac.net |
Third reason:
3) You have 3 of the 4 comments on your report. |
| #7 Vigilant[122728] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| Two seconds? I just posted this, and I posted the other one yesterday. |
| #8 Vigilant[122730] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| One day = two seconds? Nopers! |
| #9 Vigilant[122731] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| And calling it a fanfic isn't disrespect, it's what it is. |
| #10 Vigilant[122732] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| And if you post bits of what you want to say throughout multiple posts, I get to, too! |
| #11 whiteboy[122733] |
| 208-58-192-202.s202.tnt1.abrd.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| Interesting enough to merit a quick skim. |
| #12 willwinforfood[122734] |
| ool-18b817a1.dyn.optonline.net |
vigilant is good at having a conversation with himself. ..that or he thinks of things to say rather slow. =
i'm too lazy to read this. i only stare at pretty pictures and say give this br a 9.
peace,
-wwff |
| #13 -zX-Ravage-[122735] |
| 12-230-6-193.client.attbi.com |
Nerd talking too much is nt.
2 |
| #14 firestone[122737] |
| line42.tekdata.net |
| i liked this reasonble well but needs alot more action in the next one |
| #15 Jaood[122744] |
| gw2.dc.gov |
| I didn't bother reading, but noticed in one of the paragraphs you mention Thrall being dead. You can't kill off characters that aren't yours...too me it seems like usage of people who you yourself don't create make fanfics bad. It takes away from the plot and characters themselves, someone else has given those people feeling and stuff and now someone else is trying to use them, as if they knew who they were. If you don't know what I mean read a fanfic about Rook, made by Cashew-Of-Doom. Comments section explains very well what I'm trying to say. |
#16  [122766] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112512.sympatico.ca |
| Hi, 15 should die, and yes I'm waiting for the final installment to rate this . . . though it seems pretty good so far I do agree with 16 ;). |
| #17 Vigilant[122772] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
#15 is joking. And at least, if no one else likes any of this, Dagomar does. I trust his opinion more than anyone I don't know, anyway. And, in response to one of you, I'm putting in more action and less talk in the next one, don't worry.
I'm sorry that I'm posting about two pages at a time, but it gives me a sense of organization, and I don't have the time or patience to type up more than that each day. Or, maybe that whole scheme will change soon. I don't know.
But please, in the future, actually read the chapters. Each one is about five paragraphs long, and it won't kill you to read them before posting that you thought it was awful. |
| #18 andaca[122775] |
| ool-4353591e.dyn.optonline.net |
| seems ok..nothing great yet, but like you said its only the first chapter...i agree with the whole "killing off major charcters seems wrong" thing however |
| #19 Vigilant[122788] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| Killing Thrall only happened in the prologue. It set the stage for the plot, which specifically involves the fact that Thrall has been killed (in the other incarnations of this story, which I've never posted, Thrall is exchanged for other benevolent leaders). I could not have made the story work with Thrall's life preserved. If you're upset that Thrall died in my story, I guess you'll just have to get over it. That's what happened. |
| #20 Vigilant[122794] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| She turned me into a newt! |
| #21 LuckyNewbie:P[122820] |
| dialup-65.58.63.104.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
"The point of war is not to die for your country, but to make others die for theirs."
for this alone, your report deserves a -1
first you try to come up with some cool saying which was really stolen by George C. Scott playing Patton, and then you misquote it and take off the best parts it had going for it. you disgrace patton. you disgrace George C. Scott. die. |
| #22 LuckyNewbie:P[122821] |
| dialup-65.58.63.104.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| and you couldn't even take the pictures from blizzards website and take off the borders... i mean wtf |
#23  [122830] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
| God, stop posting this shit or I'm gonna start giving you auto-1's no matter what you put up. |
| #24 Vigilant[122831] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| Ouch. |
| #25 Vigilant[122843] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| I'm meeelting! MEEELTIIING!!! |
| #26 Vigilant[122888] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| Alright. Everyone post whether or not you want me to make a Chapter 2. If even one person says they want me to, I'll make it. |
| #27 Decay[123009] |
| 206.10.109.36 |
| Go for it, but Dref will auto-one it.:P |
| #28 Vigilant (the official scratching post of the evil felines of BR.com)[123077] |
| pcp122800pcs.clmntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| I'm beginning to feel like the raters' bitch. But I'll do it anyway. |
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