| #1 Swiffel[123437] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| The game was short thats why the br is short, oh and FIRST~~ =P |
| #2 mick[123439] |
| 1Cust193.tnt11.bne1.da.uu.net |
| "deny" should have been "declined" but that's ok. Not bad :| |
| #3 EldritchEvil[123440] |
| nr11-216-196-185-114.fuse.net |
Hmmm. VERY good for a first BR.
7
Keep it up! |
| #4 Swiffel[123441] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| Thanks guys, oh and mick, good point. I'm not too good with words. =) |
| #5 EldritchEvil[123442] |
| nr11-216-196-185-114.fuse.net |
BECOME "good" with words.
:) |
| #6 Swiffel[123443] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| =P |
| #7 EldritchEvil[123444] |
| nr11-216-196-185-114.fuse.net |
| Do not =P me. |
| #8 Swiffel[123445] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| Jesus do you hit refresh every 10 seconds? |
| #9 Casper...[123451] |
| spc-isp-tor-58-20-549.sprint.ca |
hey i got news for ya
nobody cares
how about u just post the screenshot next time |
| #10 Cheeseater[123452] |
| cpe-66-87-4-245.ut.sprintbbd.net |
Nice for a first BR. When I finally get around to doing one I hope it's as good :) |
| #11 Swiffel[123453] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| Thx Cheeseater, and uhh casper... I guess you just dont like me =(.. either that or everybody around heres nice and your just truthfull =( |
#12  [123455] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
You put some effort into it, and that's really the best thing I can say about it.
The game was too short, you picked a ridiculously boring game to report. Choose a better game next time. Also be more discriminating on the pictures you choose. Nobody wants to waste time downloading a picture of a zealot standing on a ramp. It couldn't hurt to improve your writing skills a bit either.... :P
4
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| #13 Draco2003[123456] |
| 1Cust242.tnt2.fort-wayne.in.da.uu.net |
Pretty good report,, wish it was longer though,, and i hate it when people acuse of hacking after they'd gotten their asses kicked
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| #14 Swiffel[123459] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| Thx for the tips dag. I don't know exactly what i can do about my writing skills tho =( |
| #15 Decay[123461] |
| 206.10.109.41 |
Don't worry swiff, 4 was drefs rating. Hes a hardass becouse he rates based not on effort but on how it compares with the great's. (i.e. YRM, ~CattleBruiser~ etc.....) Dag will prolly rate this higher. ;) I thought it was very good for a first.
~Decay |
| #16 Redemption6[123466] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| MM works against toss........ |
| #17 Decay[123467] |
| 206.10.109.62 |
| BTW swiffel, you said you dled photoshop. Where did you get it from? |
| #18 Swiffel[123474] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| I dled it from morpheus. Kazaa should also work though. |
| #19 CyMaN[123475] |
| p50806A45.dip.t-dialin.net |
well, this was your worst race, huh
? kinda fits to the title |
| #20 Swiffel[123476] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| Well, I won... |
| #21 Redemption6[123485] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| My gosh give him some slack people, at least he made an entertaining report for us to read. The game was kinda unevenly sided, which took points of the game part of the rating. You also seemed to have a problem aligning your text and pictures, and it looks like you used some html creator thingie, like frontpage, to do this. Other then that the writing was decent, and i didn't see any huge grammatical errors. The pictures could use borders but besides that theyre fine. O yea, and dref gives a hard as hell rating, so just try to submit your next report when he seems to be away ;) i think 6-7 would be fair. 4 is like what most shit fanfics get.... |
| #22 Ice.Berg[123490] |
| nh-londonderry1b-94.mrrmnh.adelphia.net |
I agree with redemption, its obvious you put more effort into this report than most first-timers do. If you need a hand with writing or proofreading swiffel email me b4 u post, i have no life and would be more than happy to proofread and suggest possible rewordings
TaimalaiX@juno.com
GL br-ing man |
| #23 Kulkusa[123494] |
| webcacheM09b.cache.pol.co.uk |
Out of all this this baffles me the most:
>his record was 94-79-58
Why'd you want to play someone with 58 discs? :) |
| #24 User14[123495] |
| spider-ntc-tc033.proxy.aol.com |
| Funny how u said u juss got paintshop pro, but i coulda made a better lookin BR with mspaint ;[ |
| #25 Lieutenant[123506] |
| adsl-67-39-2-229.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
| "Good riddens"??? Oh well, it still outclasses my reports in the engrish department t.t |
| #26 jUsDeE[123516] |
| spider-ntc-ta043.proxy.aol.com |
| i, myself.. would give this..... a 4.5 |
| #27 Swiffel[123519] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
| Kulkusa I don't descriminate who I play against (I doubt thats spelled right). I'll play somebody who has 90-0-20 Maybe their comps just shitty. And, if I own them and they disc, I still have a personal victory. And thats what counts to me. |
| #28 Swiffel[123520] |
| 24.92.13.44 |
Ok, I think I have the points I need to work on.
1. Writing
2. Game
3. Pics
4. Basically everything lol
=(
Ok thx for the help guys. Next one I do should be much better. |
| #29 TM[123522] |
| 65.120.150.5 |
| 2 for saying that m&m dosent work against toss |
| #30 TerranS[L][123581] |
| 218.210.33.65.cfl.rr.com |
| MM doenst work against a ***good*** toss player cause 1 storm and u got a bloody pool with gauss rifles laying everywhere :(, im sure u could "try" to micro it out but u have to be fast as hell... and DT = 1 swipe dead rine :( |
| #31 vincible[123590] |
| 1Cust11.tnt17.sfo8.da.uu.net |
| mm works if you're a *good* terran. Read Heartcutter's reports to see. I think he called the strat Deep Six for some reason. |
| #32 [123664] |
| pool-141-154-225-102.bos.east.verizon.net |
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| #33 demon_blade3[124786] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-2-187.rasserver.net |
| what swiffel needs is a scapegoat......it's all my fault you don't like his report. there i said it. now get your lazy asses over to mine at the top (my encounter with (a) Cronic. (headache) and my meeting with a Duke(Dude1) and comment on what I need to work on! it's me, me, me now okay? |
| #34 count(blah)blah[125954] |
| 206.251.106.6 |
| hay good job on the battle report man i always get accused of hacking if i win, stupid people, oh well gj again |
| #35 DRecon[137966] |
| 42.Red-80-58-47.pooles.rima-tde.net |
Sometimes people accuse hackers just because.. they hacked !!!
Swiffel might have hacked, since we can't see the replay and all we have is his testimony. |
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