| #1 DeonDaPeon[125869] |
| ool-18ba5285.dyn.optonline.net |
sry the pics didnt fucking work out, but i dunno some shit is up with my comp or somthin cause some pics worked, some didnt and some just came out blurry! well enjoy if u can :(...
i think this is gonna be the last time i use pics in a br |
| #2 ~@Baal@~[125870] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
I would just like to add, "How dare you ruin the name of Deon the Peon!"
Heartcutter would see you roasted on a spit over a open fire.
At least you are not destroying his SC Strats.
Baal. |
| #3 DeonDaPeon[125871] |
| ool-18ba5285.dyn.optonline.net |
| o quiet your face |
| #4 Green[LotC][125873] |
| user-24-214-49-83.knology.net |
| 4th W00T! heh nice report a little works need to be done but you'll do just fine. |
| #5 Some_God[125874] |
| proxy.or4.marketscore.com |
| You need a background to spice up your BRs |
| #6 mulla-the-bum[125875] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
you should of let
me proofread it |
| #7 DeonDaPeon[125876] |
| ool-18ba5285.dyn.optonline.net |
| u did, but i got pissed, forgot to change it and just submitted |
| #8 DeonDaPeon[125877] |
| ool-18ba5285.dyn.optonline.net |
| i just wanted it out of my face eric, i was on it about 10 hours straight just fucking with the pics |
| #9 mulla-the-bum[125878] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| should of stopped working for a while then |
| #10 Kane[125879] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| STOP POSTING THESE YOU IDIOT I MEAN GOD HOW STUPID ARE YOU WHAT THE HELL |
| #11 DeonDaPeon[125880] |
| ool-18ba5285.dyn.optonline.net |
| stop posting what? calm down i posted 1 stupid thing that i told u not to read, so u wasted ur time and did, not my fault |
| #12 LuckyNewbie:P[125881] |
| dialup-63.211.242.55.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| you do realize this is a bannable offence |
| #13 STONECOLDNEWBIE[125882] |
| c-24-245-66-207.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| WHOA ELITE LOL |
| #14 Sovereignty[125883] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
wtf. 10 hours on this? most on the pics? wtf? there's like 3 pics, and 1 is blurry as piss. wtf?
...
wtf? |
| #15 EldritchEvil[125884] |
| nr11-66-161-173-186.fuse.net |
"ya hes lvl 7 but dont be fooled he has shitty micro bad strategies and oh ya a speech imparament"
Enough said. |
| #16 demon_blade3[125886] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-0-125.rasserver.net |
| luckynewbie:p, your statement intrigues me. i wish to learn more. where are is the rule crap so i can look and learn and not get myself banned :/ |
| #17 doobiesnacks[125888] |
| c-66-56-2-206.atl.client2.attbi.com |
baal has a point.
ur a fag. leave deon's memory intact, he's site heritage. |
| #18 Psyonic_Reaver[125890] |
| 1Cust237.tnt2.bend.or.da.uu.net |
This blows, sorry.
1 |
| #19 Lieutenant[125892] |
| adsl-67-39-6-222.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
| I'm going to arbitrarily blame this horror-blend of HTML and MSPaint on Time. |
| #20 IBashar[125894] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
Wtf ?? Do you guys read the comments before posting stupid things like that ?? Especially the comments FROM THE AUTHOR.
I accept your appologizes, Deon. Change your name or you'll be banned. That's sad but true. Chose something like PeonTheDeon, that could be enough (you're somewhere the opposite of the good old one)
Keep trying. Wait for IDONTREMENBERWHO, he has the habit of reading the sources and telling what's wrong with it.
Greetings |
| #21 IBashar[125895] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
| K, I just tried to read the sources. I figured your problems have nothing to do with HTML. But HTF can you have a blurry pic after posting from a clear pic ?? |
| #22 Mindthief[125899] |
| dsl-65-185-176-141.telocity.com |
| Don't hate on the Tauren Chieftan yo |
| #23 non-imperatorp[125900] |
| h002078ccd7eb.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| horrible game and it was on warcraft 3 too :/ |
| #24 Redemption6[125901] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| The game wasn't so good, but the report wasn't so bad either. A few things that could be worked on is the writing perhaps, and the pictures. Basically sometimes when you copy a picture into a picture editor, IE photoshop or paint, the picture becomes blurry. Simply recopy it and it will become unblurry again. I think that you guys should cut deon some slack, i don't know about the name stuff (wuz the big deal here) but this report wasn't that bad compared to some crap we've seen here. For instance, time, who are you to judge reports? and psy_reaver at least give some constructive critizism? |
| #25 IBashar[125902] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
Thx for not letting me alone, Redemption6. But beware of the "newb-newb !", it'll become your new nick. Strange you haven't heard of DtPeon ...
I like people like you, who're less willing to flame than to give advices.
Keep on fighting stupidity, it's a hard work. |
| #26 C_Time[125903] |
| CPE3438373735393633.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
nice try deon ;)
5.5 |
| #27 C_Time[125904] |
| CPE3438373735393633.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
i know how frustrating it is to work so long on ur battlereport and have it come out all wrong once u post it
spent 3 days on my last one :(
hang in there! |
| #28 2e722[125908] |
| cache211.156ce.scvmaxonline.com.sg |
its all about patience~
thats what i learnt in my first br =(~...the hard way.
Peace |
| #29 IBashar[125911] |
| ABordeaux-103-1-13-197.abo.wanadoo.fr |
| Wow ! Peace on br.com !! I'm deafened (f%£¨ing altavista translator !! "abasourdi" in french) |
| #30 Redemption6[125913] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| If newb newb is to become my nickname on the sole fact that i have no clue who dt peon is, so be it........ |
| #31 koa.quicksilver[125915] |
| ool-182ea1c4.dyn.optonline.net |
| lol, right on redemption6. theres a lot of crap like that |
| #32 doobiesnacks[125916] |
| c-66-56-2-206.atl.client2.attbi.com |
| STOP SAYING THAT!! |
| #33 doobiesnacks[125917] |
| c-66-56-2-206.atl.client2.attbi.com |
| if u dont no who peon is, commence crying and begging for mercy. stop reminding us of ur newbishness:((((((((((( |
| #34 demon_blade3[125922] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-1-226.rasserver.net |
| begging. crying. now what? |
| #35 CrackHeadJeb - Drone[125923] |
| alteon-pcc1.iats.missouri.edu |
Hrm. I'm not going to rate this. You would be very unhappy.
-CHJ |
| #36 Decay[125925] |
| 206.10.109.50 |
| For those of you who do not know who Deon the Peon is, I suggest you go and read every report ever written by heartcutter. Hell, I suggest doing it anyway. Not eyecatching stuff, but its the kind of stuff this site was built on. Mmmmm..... |
| #37 DeonDaPeon[125926] |
| ool-18ba5285.dyn.optonline.net |
thanx decay
|
| #38 NFT[125927] |
| dhcp80ffca51.residence-rooms.uiowa.edu |
| He's defiled the name of Deon simply by using "Da" instead of "The". |
| #39 IcE-Inforcer[125931] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
Ok, as you can see alot of people are being assholes cuz this report sux. But who cares, it's ur first. As long as ur next brs get better and better and so on.
I don't think you should use plain HTML to write brs, it's too hard and unifficient. Go download an old version of Frontpgae or something. You could even download a better program overnight, like FrontPage 2000, DreamWeaver (hint* dl this) or WebMaster. These programs write the HTML for you and they don't make mistakes.
Second of all, DO not use MsPaint (were these pix bitmap btw?). Use Photoshop, FireWorks (not sure bout this one) or something else that can do some ~neato~ shit.
Hope this helps. Actually, this better help. Now go and write somfin amazing!!
-IcE- |
| #40 IcE-Inforcer[125933] |
| NorthBay-ppp-209-91-189-221.vianet.ca |
*Unefficient
=D |
| #41 demon_blade3[125938] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-0-222.rasserver.net |
| i got html 4 for dummies (tha prfuct boko fer mee!) and it had dreadmweaver, agile, fusion, and some other crap but yeah dreamweaver is the shizzat |
| #42 Mindthief[125942] |
| dsl-65-185-176-141.telocity.com |
| I'm currently writing a report in notepad and its gonna rock =) |
| #43 demon_blade3[125947] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-0-222.rasserver.net |
| w00t go old fashioned! |
| #44 Redemption6[125950] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| Lol go ICE! saying everyones an asshole and then saying the report sucks. lol, the report actually doesn't suck, weve seen worse than that and we all know it |
| #45 conteisking[125957] |
| ool-18ba5793.dyn.optonline.net |
| need 2 spice it up |
| #46 The boner[125958] |
| ool-182ff2c8.dyn.optonline.net |
| im a dumb ass |
#47  [125968] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
All the constructive criticisms have already been said. My big one would be to work on the writing -- it's not great and the action is very stutter-steppy. 3.5.
Cheers,
~CB~ |
| #48 el_sux0r[125972] |
| chem-193.umd.edu |
| I no longer feel so bad at getting a text-only 6 or so, back in the day. |
| #49 TheKinslayer[125975] |
| modemcable215.182-203-24.mtl.mc.videotron.ca |
| to ice-enforcer who write, d/l something like dreamweaver or frontpage2000, I hope you didn't mean to d/l somes warez cause my brother is in multimedia at his college and he works HARD to be able to buy then legit way |
| #50 IcE-Inforcer[125977] |
| NorthBay-ppp-209-91-170-25.efni.com |
Hey guess what buddy, my dad works for microsoft. He actually programmed some excel :P. And u know what? He doesn't give a shit bout warez. I bet 90% of the software out there is warez. That's why the price on good software is soooooo high.
Big companies out there like microsoft and Macromedia gotta raise the price of their software cuz so many ppl get the warez crap.
So go ahead and tell ur big brother to beat me up with a stick, piss in my chimeny (oops), eat my dog or even steal my hose. I dun care. He can also get the rest of the people here who use warez. Which is about 5000 ppl just on this site.
And no, I didn't tell him to get the Warez version, why would I do that?
-IcE- Have fun stopping warez btw |
#51  [125991] |
| crtntx1-ar7-4-63-073-022.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
gee kinslayer, have you never done anytihng illegal?
Burned CDs?
Used a Trademarked word without the "TM" thing?
Driven over the speed limit?
shut up dude, frikin hypocrite |
| #52 mastaX[126068] |
| ool-18ba5793.dyn.optonline.net |
writing needs work
|
| #53 DeonDaPeon[126101] |
| ool-18ba5285.dyn.optonline.net |
| thanx for for, well thanx for not banning me at least, i dunno if il write another report... but w/e if i d ill be sure to get every1thing perfect |
| #54 MastaX[126170] |
| ool-18ba5793.dyn.optonline.net |
| lol omg |
| #55 MastaX[126174] |
| ool-18ba5793.dyn.optonline.net |
deon dont give up u will get better. just keep making br and gl
ps. its seem 2 me u might wanna change ur name cause we already have a deon and gl |
| #56 demon_blade3[126477] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-1.rasserver.net |
| i'm gonna change my name....i was writing obscene words on my textbooks (literally writing "obscene word") and i suddenly remembered a little pic i made connected to a story about freespace i was gonna write. long story short i had remembered my sn "demon*star" from old games. ah how i miss being the star. god i sound so gay. excuse ,e |
| #57 IcE-Inforcer[126595] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| (kinslayer got owned) homo |
| #58 Hk-Luther[126752] |
| adsl-141-151-29-162.ba-dsg.net |
| Nice job on the report, and the pics are fine for a first... jesus i coulndt do that, well done! |
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