| #1 IcE-Inforcer[126601] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
Aight, know that the pics and all are sorta experimental so they might look cheesy etc (not like there's alot).
Hopefully I did a good job on this, you guys can judge that.
I swear, I must of put about 2 hours into trying to get this to work. Now to check if all is working properly. |
| #2 IcE-Inforcer[126602] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
The link to the video at the end doesn't work, and I have no clue whats wrong. So nvm it.
Feel free to critisize at will.
-IcE- |
| #3 IcE-Inforcer[126603] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| Damn, the swapovers didn't work either. Looks like all the pics are lame now =D |
| #4 4th[126604] |
| cache-da02.proxy.aol.com |
| 4th, hey hey hey, 1st non-author, hey hey hey |
| #5 andaca[126605] |
| ool-4353591e.dyn.optonline.net |
| 2nd non-auth |
| #6 [126606] |
| ppp-67-118-253-2.dialup.pltn13.pacbell.net |
3rd non-auth, decent report
6 |
| #7 [126607] |
| ppp-67-118-253-2.dialup.pltn13.pacbell.net |
3rd non-auth, decent report
7 |
| #8 [126608] |
| cache-syd-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| Good report, nice work on doing something different. |
| #9 demon_blade3[126609] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-1.rasserver.net |
| ahh #9 sucks. banshees do better than necros in 1 on 1s(dont mention the fact you dont play 1 on 1 dont mention the fact you dont play 1 on 1 dont mention...). poor rook :'( i feel bad. I'll let him get some free wins off of me (by free i mean that i'll suck like i usually do) |
| #10 Who'sGotLag.IDO[126611] |
| usrns77.dialup.hawaii.edu |
Hmm, it was alright but not great. Your manner of "storytelling/reporting" was mainly facts punched out with no real flow to it. I felt more like I was reading an instruction manual than a story.
The format was nice enough though
I'd say 6, maybe 6.5 since 6 seems too low.
PS. you should tell your spellchecker that he missed one on the last page where you thank him (ennemy). Plus more misspellings in the thank you itself (misspelled spell checker) |
| #11 BreeD[126614] |
| cache-haw.cableinet.co.uk |
good read
fuck you for linking to porn at the end tho |
| #12 -the o_0-[126615] |
| 24.138.58.44 |
Fuck, I clicked on I'm a fat fag. I swear I'll strike you down! Please take out my eyes.
Oh, nice interactive report though. It highly entertained me. I failed Rook once though... I blame Rook, because.. uhh... yeah. |
| #13 titans-thesoby[126616] |
| d-207-5-252-246.s-way.com |
| "screw this" lol |
| #14 DarkInferno_IV[126619] |
| host217-34-67-216.in-addr.btopenworld.com |
| Nice report. |
| #15 Dr3vil[126620] |
| 199.111.72.171 |
Not bad for "Choose your own adventure" report. I clicked everything that made sense from my bnet experience and got to the end, no prob.
Banshees are better than necros, but your helping a n00b, not playing it yourself. I know n00bs can't micro banshees.
Actually, that's a great format for these reports, takes your own micro skills out of the equation.
My only problem was that not only could you not win, but you couldn't get to tier 3 while darklord had been there for quite some time.
I'd give you a 7 for the report, but I'll give you a 6 for being latently gay. |
| #16 malygos[126622] |
| pm734-02.dialip.mich.net |
| this didnt make sence sometimes but was a fun read, like when you try to counter it would be already like 5 minutes later when he has a bigger army |
| #17 Zeal[126624] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| it was ok, but i dont really like that kind, good idead though |
| #18 vincible[126626] |
| TANG-EIGHTY-FOUR.MIT.EDU |
That was kind of fun.
I think you win "most improved author" ^^ |
| #19 Decay[126627] |
| 206.10.109.82 |
Lol, I won my first try and I've actually never played War3 since the beta. Anyway, pretty nice report. Easy 7-8.
#10, that was irony, misspelling words while thanking his spell checker. hehe, see?
~Decay |
| #20 IcE-Inforcer[126631] |
| nor-tcs1-port69.vianet.on.ca |
Thanks for all the critism heheh. I know some things in the timeline were messed up, but know that's it's extremely hard to make it all fit together.
Some things in this report are newbishcuz I wrote alot of it back when I had just started playing. Also don't forget that Rook's a dumbass :P
And breed, you got what u asked for :D.
-IcE- |
| #21 Blitzkreig_[126632] |
| 63.226.231.90 |
| thanks for the porn link! |
| #22 IcE-Inforcer[126633] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
That link was supposed to bring you to a fagget site :(.
For some reason it didn't. |
| #23 DarkLord[126634] |
| NorthBay-ppp-209-91-171-99.efni.com |
| You gay fagget, why didnt this link to a REAL gay porn site, it woulda been so much funnier than " oh thx for the porn link " i told you to check if it was a queer site before you actualy posted. not a bad job...id also like to point out that i took the screen shots! (bitch/comment whore) |
| #24 rado907[126637] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
A fun report.
Can I go now? Without being acclaimed as gay? |
| #25 Aeluin[126638] |
| cache-mtc-aa02.proxy.aol.com |
| Great report just you got me grounded man :( i should hurt you but i wont cuz i wanan read more reports like this |
| #26 Sovereignty[126639] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
| wow that was fucking retarded. having dead-ends after every link except 1 in every fucking window sucks. not to mention while i was trying to alt+f4 out of the 1938204923 fucking porn popups, i cancelled my download of a cs movie i had been downloading for the past 3 hours. lame |
| #27 Sovereignty[126640] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
| unfortunately I couldn't really say "fucking" any more and still keep a coherant rant :( |
| #28 Me[126658] |
| scf1-fe0-1.wc.optusnet.com.au |
if u had cable it would have been no problem :)
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| #29 Gotenkz[126690] |
| ca-yorbalnd-cuda1-c1b-141.anhmca.adelphia.net |
| That was the dumbest thing i have ever read.... do no read this post.... its the only way this newb can feal good about himself writing about himself winning |
| #30 IcE-Inforcer[126702] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
| Lol who the hell are you? Aka nobody? |
| #31 YESS[126703] |
| pm3a-41.dcn.davis.ca.us |
IcE IS AKA VERY BIG SOMEBODY!!
psyche! LOLROFLRFOVL |
| #32 FLS@Work[126704] |
| 203.98.135.2 |
| this is okay |
| #33 anonymous[126749] |
| cache-mtc-aa02.proxy.aol.com |
| rook owns you bitch. |
| #34 IcE-Inforcer[126759] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
Haha...
well I guess this was just a dumb idea. Drefsab can truly do this like nobody else.
As for the comments, there are only about 4-5 that are serious... what happened to all the serious people? And who rated??
I guess I'll go back to normal reporting -_-
-IcE-
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#35  [126780] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
Fun idea, but the writing wasn't too enthralling. The shifts between Rook's POV and "your" POV were jarring. Do people still make gargoyles? :D
6.5 - 7.
Cheers,
~CB~ |
| #36 IcE-Inforcer[126805] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
This sucked -_-.
I worked harder than any other br on this and it's probably the worst so far. Oh well, watch out for my next report coming out soon. It's gonna blow the roof. Well... hopefully it will -_-.
-IcE- |
| #37 illnasty[127461] |
| pcp01266779pcs.danbry01.ct.comcast.net |
| haha your little story game thing was awsome dude. nice site btw ill be here often |
| #38 [127822] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| Haha gotta try this.. |
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