| #1 EthelIAR! 11 w0rd[126705] |
| pm3a-41.dcn.davis.ca.us |
| PERFECT 10 for the mindnumbing amount of detail! |
| #2 FLS@Work[126706] |
| 203.98.135.2 |
| this freaking sucks I feel bad for giving a 5 =[ |
| #3 mulla-the-bum[126708] |
| cache-da02.proxy.aol.com |
ok 1: remeber detail and lots of it
2: save the replay
3: less abriviations
4: pics would be nice
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| #4 CyMaN[126716] |
| p50807BA6.dip.t-dialin.net |
| One who reads that knows how amazed u were, that can't be bad. The writing is not so bad but plz use us instead of are where it has to be us :) |
| #5 Me[126717] |
| scf1.wc.optusnet.com.au |
There were to many abbriviations. I read the first paragraph and then gave up.
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| #6 Mr_Krubu[126723] |
| cache-mtc-ac08.proxy.aol.com |
| I thought it was an okay report but needs less abreviations and pics would be nice(as said before). I thought that it was kind of a depressing report(in a strange sort of way cuz you got ownzed). needs A Little MORE detail and less forgetting on units. A good way to remember is by saving the replay!i! |
| #7 ZeaL[126736] |
| 205.204.242.21 |
| pretty nice |
| #8 Some_God[126738] |
| proxy.ord.marketscore.com |
| Oh of course give the pictureless , not good writing , no HTML WC3 report good praze ... but the EE reports i make u say sux hairy ballz ... eh? |
| #9 Cataclysmic[126742] |
| ce-stjh-01-01.rogers.nf.net |
| Dont get us wrong, this sucks too. |
| #10 Sorry guys.[126745] |
| adsl-141-151-29-162.ba-dsg.net |
I think i made a big mistake.
This should of been a simple strategy post on some forum,
Im real sorry.. i'll work on creating a better one.
However it would help if i could get some tips... so if any "skilled" Br reporter could give me their AIM or Email maybe we could get in touch.
Once again sorry to: #1 EthelIAR! 11 w0rd[126705]
#2 FLS@Work[126706]
#8 Some_God[126738]
#9 Cataclysmic[126742]
for wasting your time. But please remember im a new writer and constructive critisism is always good. :)
~good day. |
| #11 Hk-Luther[126746] |
| adsl-141-151-29-162.ba-dsg.net |
| The above is by Hk-Luther my apologies. |
| #12 andaca[126760] |
| ool-4353591e.dyn.optonline.net |
this got a 5 how...?
lol |
| #13 doobiesnacks[126763] |
| c-66-56-2-206.atl.client2.attbi.com |
...well...
if nothing else, be proud that [FLS]Prozerran rated this, er, report.
If you don't remember every specific detail about a game or have a replay of the game saved, dont make a br on it. wait for a good game, something detailed and balanced, with many strategies and twists, so you can take your time and write more than 1 to 1 1/2 pages long thx. at least make up names for the players if you really can't remember them:(
try again tho, its people like you that keep this site going now. |
| #14 Decay[126770] |
| 206.10.109.70 |
Hey, at least he's trying.
Anyway, the report wasn't all that great, but just to let you know, you'll have more luck and probably get more information from the guides than waiting for a gosu battlereporter to contact you. :P they can be found on the left side of the screen. |
| #15 Hk-Luther[126771] |
| adsl-141-151-29-162.ba-dsg.net |
Thanks!
after this dissapointing performce i went straight to the guides (as i should of to begin with) and started downloading programs and collecting information.
I now have the recommeneded paint shop pro, as well as DreamWeaver 4. I also got Flash 5 to begin my mini-battle/creep animations.
Its going to be a long journy though.. learning all these new programs is a lot of work ( + i also started writing HTML based on the html guide... even though it shoundt be needed with Dw4).
I hope that you all will be patiant with me, and even though this one was so bad, consider reading my next.. as i hope to improve......
Alot.
Anyway thanks for the constructive critism decay and doob, you guys rock!
To everyone else....
The noob in training, Luther. |
| #16 Federal_Slacker[126775] |
| 247.houston-31rh16rt.tx.dial-access.att.net |
Well, I won't insult it since I probably couldn't do better.
Nice first attempt. |
#17  [126782] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
The way this was written sounded like you were excited and relaying it to war3 players in a chat room. For a stronger report, use fewer abbreviations, and write solid paragraphs. Without pictures, there's nothing to hide your writing, so it has to be near perfect to succeed. It's obvious that you're trying, so I look forward to what you can cook up next. 4.0 - 4.5.
Cheers,
~CB~
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| #18 Me[126785] |
| scf1.wc.optusnet.com.au |
| wow! u have adsl! :) |
| #19 ZerG~LinG[126791] |
| p425-115.ppp.get2net.dk |
No comment on the report, everythings already been said.
Whats really exciting is what you can do with ur next report.
Good luck |
| #20 vincible[126810] |
| TANG-TWO-SIXTY-ONE.MIT.EDU |
| Hey, you've got potential. I look forward to your next one. Don't mind any flames, everyone gets flamed here at some point ;) |
| #21 Mr.Puddles[126837] |
| netcache-2004.public.lawson.webtv.net |
| not bad for a first. little too short to get the best grade, but keep trying |
| #22 Pay Your Taxes[127194] |
| nat23.eaglesi.net |
| Keep it up! You'll be there before you know it. Know if I only knew where "there" was... :( |
| #23 What[128629] |
| ool-4353a118.dyn.optonline.net |
| Cool |
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