| #1 mick[126818] |
| 1Cust207.tnt9.bne1.da.uu.net |
This report took a lot of time and effort, mostly 30min-1hr periods over 2 weeks.
I am out for the entire day tommorrow and am going to sleep right after this, so any mistakes(shouldn't be any) will have to wait :]
ENJOY! |
| #2 ZerG~LinG[126819] |
| p404-077.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Hey, 1st non author ;) |
| #3 DeltaFlyer13[126820] |
| h24-76-29-7.vw.shawcable.net |
THIRD!
wow a record for me! |
| #4 ])ar](_Shiran[126821] |
| 205.151.251.11 |
| I'm going to take a visit to clan CMSF- and teach them a little lesson :) |
| #5 vincible[126822] |
| SABERTOOTH.MIT.EDU |
| Good report Mick, as always. |
| #6 Chris[126823] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
#6
W00t
I didn't think the report was as good as the other ones. Maybe I'll read it again to get some sense for it. |
| #7 DarkRider[126825] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
| Enjoyable read. |
| #8 2e722[126826] |
| cache211.156ce.scvmaxonline.com.sg |
sorry but i didnt really read it, just skimmed thru it...well 8-9..maybe 10 for starcraft. lots of efforts have been put into it..good good ^^
Peace |
| #9 Snowman[126830] |
| e0.filt2.davidson.tn.ena.net |
very nice read
easy gold^^ |
| #10 otherOne[126833] |
| ool-182e5490.dyn.optonline.net |
| gosu, get on b.net more often ;[ |
| #11 Epoch[126834] |
| ool-182f07a7.dyn.optonline.net |
Heh, definite 8-9... vgj
btw...
...What persuaded your parents to name your brother April? |
| #12 mulla-the-bum[126835] |
| cache-rq02.proxy.aol.com |
| a sc report praise the gods now off to go piss off the people at clan cmsf |
| #13 Ender[126836] |
| 128.226.37.251 |
| 10!!!! because its sc |
| #14 Mr.Puddles[126838] |
| netcache-2004.public.lawson.webtv.net |
| mick i love ur reports. DO WAR3 REPORTS!! |
| #15 Redemption6[126840] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| yes do war3 reports. war3> bw for reports, replays, and games. Anyways this was high quality, as expected. |
| #16 IcE-Inforcer[126841] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| IMSO, this was graphicaly better than your other reports and as always, a good read. Oops g2g eat brb. |
| #17 Chris[126842] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| Meh, I've come to the conclusion that you should stick to humor. Your "story" stuff is.... not as 1337. |
| #18 Decay[126847] |
| 206.10.109.79 |
While this is probably a solid 9, I also enjoy your humor more. :( However, this was very good, and the clan storyline behind it was fun to read as well. And if you start doing war3 reports, I'll cry. =*(
Kudos!
~Decay |
| #19 UltimateFire[126850] |
| spider-ntc-tl051.proxy.aol.com |
good report mick, but wouldnt april notice that the replay was on temple and not mausoleam when the leaders were downloading it =?
I also think that your humor reports were more fun to read, but this was good and the story intertwining it was entertaining.
I would rate this 8-9. |
#20  [126855] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
This is the first report of yours that I've read, so I don't have any preconceptions about it. I thought the battles were usually easy to follow and pleasantly written, but the story that glued them all together was a little weak. It might have been more palatable if posted as 1 battle per report (something I thought about Strega's Richard Simmons saga as well). Perhaps I just have a short attention span, but it's harder to get excited over three really good battles when they're all part of the same report -- details run together and it I start to lose focus about halfway through. Still, it's solid work. 8.5ish.
Cheers,
~CB~ |
| #21 CrackHeadJeb - Rater[126856] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Good job you dirty mic.
;)
9.
-CHJ
P.S. I've watched your style improve over the last 6 months. You've come a long way, which is why it's damn tough making a constructive comment on this report. |
| #22 test[126857] |
| pool-138-89-70-64.mad.east.verizon.net |
| y won't my post appear? |
| #23 HasuN00b[126858] |
| pool-138-89-70-64.mad.east.verizon.net |
I really enjoyed your overarching clan intrigue story, which tied the 3 replays together. The clan story acting as nice intermissions. The punchline at the end was very funny, and the graphics and collages are excellent. I liked the unusual maps. All in all, very entertaining. I would give it an 8.5 also.
|
| #24 HasuN00b[126859] |
| pool-138-89-70-64.mad.east.verizon.net |
[What's the max line the poster will allow? This is my 10 try]
Some critique (small stuff). Need a bit more proof reading. Within some of your paragraphs your sentences end with linebreaks, it doesn't look good. They should look like regular paragraphs, with no extra trailing space, except for the last sentence. The first replay's description seemed uneven. The first half contains alot of detail, then the game seems to suddenly end. You say Terran is winning, and has destroyed the Zerg main. All of a sudden, like a fast forward, a lurker is dropped on the Terran expansion, and game over??? And what happened to the mutalisks. I was enjoying reading the exploits of the mutalisk harassment group, but there is no mention of how they ended up.
SC >> WAR3! |
| #25 mick[126863] |
| 1Cust173.tnt8.bne1.da.uu.net |
I probably should have mentioned that the story and most characters are fictious(CMSF-April is an aka of mine).
All graphics(ALL) were made in MSPaint.
I don't and can't play War3 till I get a better computer :[
I didn't want the story to overshadow the games, it was just an interesting way of placing the 3 games together.
Ungh, I'm tired from riding roller-coasters all day >_< |
#26  [126868] |
| pcd252169.netvigator.com |
| this is pretty funny :) |
| #27 CyMaN[126869] |
| p50806FBC.dip.t-dialin.net |
| i liked it very much, easy 9 |
| #28 ZerG~LinG[126870] |
| p428-043.ppp.get2net.dk |
Leet stuff, forgot to comment after reading.
8 |
| #29 LoZeR-X[126877] |
| p-proxy-1-int0.net.wisc.edu |
| quality hehehehe |
| #30 Ender[126881] |
| 128.226.37.76 |
| aahhh mick!!! where are the alt text? T.T |
| #31 EldritchEvil[126890] |
| nr11-216-196-186-184.fuse.net |
omg 9
GJ mick, as always. |
| #32 Hooded Guest[126892] |
| pool-64-222-81-15.burl.east.verizon.net |
I was gonna say 'aw MAN that must've sucked big time for you when you got the wrong replay' but then i read the comment you made saying the story was fictious...=-(
i give this report a 10.
its too bad the story was fictious...gj i loooooooooooved it :) |
| #33 IcE-Inforcer[126893] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
Poor mick, he's still reporting with notepad :(.
Get dreamweaver, frontpage, webmaster or whichever you want. Just use kazaa or Imesh or somfin and go download it overnight. You'll notice a huge improvement. Also get a pciture editing program, if you don't have one yet.
Overall, pretty good.
-IcE- |
| #34 Federal_Slacker[126894] |
| 105.houston-32rh15rt.tx.dial-access.att.net |
"Although under pressure, UnderPressure refuses to give in..."
Why is this still funny to me?
Great Report. |
| #35 stonecoldnewbie[126895] |
| c-24-245-66-207.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| nice |
| #36 CrackHeadJeb - Rater[126909] |
| alteon-pcc1.iats.missouri.edu |
What's wrong with reporting with notepad?
-CHJ |
| #37 Chris[126927] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
| Nothing is wrong with notepad. In my opinion, its the only thing that Mick can use cause his computer is a piece of shit. |
| #38 Critique[126931] |
| 150.208.98.21 |
| Finally a Starcraft report!!!! enough of the wc3's already lets get back to starcraft |
| #39 Zeon[126947] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
OMG YES! A STARCRAFT REPORT! MY LIFE IS SAVED!
anyways, awesome report Mick. loved it, like i love starcraft. :) |
| #40 Sovereignty[126960] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
| *votes mick for hall of fame* |
| #41 [SM]Strega~F[126962] |
| 1Cust140.tnt9.adl1.da.uu.net |
Yeah, Notepad >>> Dreamweaver etc. Pansy-ass 'proffesional programs'. Who needs 'em!
Strega |
| #42 Casper...[127042] |
| spc-isp-tor-58-19-311.sprint.ca |
| command of the english language is a prerequisition for battle reporting. |
| #43 Alacrity[127072] |
| cache-mtc-af02.proxy.aol.com |
| Word of the da! |
| #44 Beanie[127079] |
| 12-237-120-140.client.attbi.com |
| You are so sexy mickr |
| #45 celix[127127] |
| cache-dl10.proxy.aol.com |
| good report ;p |
| #46 mick[127210] |
| 1Cust184.tnt9.bne1.da.uu.net |
I use notepad because I know all the HTML code I need/use and I find it easier/quicker/neater than those editiing programs.
hi celix |
| #47 celix[127269] |
| cache-dl10.proxy.aol.com |
| hi mick |
| #48 DeltaFlyer13[127384] |
| h24-76-29-7.vw.shawcable.net |
Mmmmmmm......I hate doing HTML by plain typing it all out. I need to find those WYSIWYG editors grrrrrrr.......for free and an easy one at that.
Hey does CMSF have a website? 'Cause I'm curious to find out what they have to say about this report.....hehehe |
| #49 Chris[127884] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| A winner is you! |
| #50 clocksock[128050] |
| c68.113.234.162.stp.wi.charter.com |
| nice report you have there, its good to see peeps still play starcraft |
| #51 rox0r[128073] |
| evrtwa1-ar5-4-65-009-062.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
heoaehoaehoaehoahe...
9.99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 |
| #52 ReD[128496] |
| px2wh.vc.shawcable.net |
| Lol mick haven't play sc for awhile and still got ur skillz back, impressive :) |
| #53 Neo[128882] |
| 65.115.220.75 |
Gosu report.
Chobo players.
I give at an 8. |
| #54 Undisclosed[144026] |
| DI-604-2.cpe.alex.al.charter.com |
| CMSF ownz you all!!! |
| #55 None[144027] |
| DI-604-2.cpe.alex.al.charter.com |
| Clan CMSF Ownz You All |
| #56 CMSF[144028] |
| DI-604-2.cpe.alex.al.charter.com |
| I have never heard of a CMSF-April |
| #57 cuz ur a loser[147979] |
| ACC67788.ipt.aol.com |
| cuz ur a loser |
#58  mk[148726] |
| 11Cust86.tnt12.bne1.temp.da.uu.net |
| |
| #59 ObiWan3254[150888] |
| 67-22-240-7.albyny.adelphia.net |
| What kind of a Dumbass clan bans there own webmaster (rofl)!? i mean come on, he was probably a better player than all of you combined anyway, sheesh, i mean, u CMSF people must SUCK. (yeah thats a challenge.). I give the report a 10. GJ!, haha hey CMSF, whats ur clan website? "WorstStarcraftPlayersEver.com"? |
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