| #1 Dist[128353] |
| dhcp80ffca51.residence-rooms.uiowa.edu |
| Good pics. |
#2  [128354] |
| crtntx1-ar7-4-63-073-022.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
| Nice stuff, writing style was a bit dry though |
| #3 [128355] |
| crtntx1-ar7-4-63-073-022.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
More elaborate...
I liked your pics and the updates, and especially your player choice :)
However, as I said before, your writing itself is a bit dry. I forgot who said it, but some rater once made the remark that a truly good report would be complete even without the pictures. While your text DOES tell the whole story, it tends to be a bit on the boring side because you don't really add much commentary/humor. If you added a bit more subjective writing to your objective tone, then I'm sure you can do a lot better
As for this one, I'd give it an 8 |
| #4 StonedKnight[128356] |
| modemcable110.15-203-24.mtl.mc.videotron.ca |
| pretty sweet |
| #5 Blackhawk[128360] |
| cache-dg01.proxy.aol.com |
| sweet writeing now this is quailty writeing a fine piece of work. |
| #6 Mindthief[128361] |
| dsl-65-185-176-141.telocity.com |
| Thanks Cow, I'll try to add more commentary and stuff next time. (BTW, how did you flip your font upside down?) |
| #7 Who'sGotLag.IDO[128362] |
| usrns74.dialup.hawaii.edu |
| it's a picture |
| #8 [128363] |
| crtntx1-ar7-4-63-073-022.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
| hax |
| #9 Jaood[128364] |
| hc6524652.dhcp.vt.edu |
| wow, this is like an old game :O |
#10  [128367] |
| dhcp065-025-098-203.neo.rr.com |
Yeah, seriously old game.. I don't even think the replay will work with it now?
God I sucked.. oh wait, that hasnt changed. =p then again, UD isn't my race... |
| #11 kaby[128368] |
| 12-248-22-212.client.attbi.com |
| good report. little dry on the writing. could throw in some humor maybe. 8.5-9 |
| #12 EldritchEvil[128370] |
| nr11-66-161-173-122.fuse.net |
| What they said. |
| #13 Mindthief[128371] |
| dsl-65-185-176-141.telocity.com |
| Yeah it will still play, I was looking for a pretty good game that had some people from br.com so i had this old one that i had obs and i deicded to report on it. |
| #14 [128373] |
| crtntx1-ar7-4-63-073-022.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
| UD is a suck race for me too... i never rememeber to deffend my expos cuz i can't TP t.t |
#15  [128374] |
| nr11-66-161-173-122.fuse.net |
Hey - We're not blaming you for reporting! We're in a drought for good reports, so keep it up!
-EldritchEvil |
| #16 Jaood[128377] |
| hc6524652.dhcp.vt.edu |
| heh, im starting to remember this game. fuckers wouldnt ever let my expo get fully operational and i bought maybe 5-6 wands of negation to kill the WE and inevitable skele. excel didnt much like my wands :) |
#17  [128389] |
| 203.98.135.2 |
| this report is not bad, but the writing is a bit confusing as to which army goes where and what happened to them |
| #18 IBashar[128393] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
"Twords" should be "Towards" I think.
The text was too dense to follow. Maybe with colored arrows showing the moves on the mini-map ...
"The optimist proclaims the world is the best possible and the pessimist fears it's true". Amazing quote !! (here is an approximated one)
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| #19 ZerG~LinG[128395] |
| p463-81.ppp.get2net.dk |
I was very confused when reading this BR. In every other line you remind the reader of the exact number of upgrades/lvls/exps that this or that unit have. This ruins the reports flow, and ulitimately makes a lot of the paragraph a bit boring.
What you should do next time, is to cut drastically down on all the hard facts. Allthough its nice to now upgrades and such, they shouldnt be half the report. And i found myself scrolling past the huge update sections every time. As a reader, I want a report to be entertaining, and easy to read. This was somewhat entertaining, but the good bits were ruined by a lot of more or less uninteresting facts. |
| #20 ZerG~LinG[128396] |
| p463-81.ppp.get2net.dk |
-Continued-
Basically what I'm saying is to stick with the important bits. For example, I don't care exactly where every player creeped, and exactly how it went. Most of the first paragraphs could easily have been cut to 1-2 "action packed" ones.
As for the pics, good job on getting some nice angle shots and keeping it simple. Next time you might want to make them a bit bigger :)
Lastly, I just wanna say that this really was a good report, with some flaws that ruin the experience some.
Looking forward to your next attempt ;-)
7 |
| #21 DarkRider[128398] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
| Good job..more humor would be nice |
| #22 chobo[128400] |
| CPE014060001930.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| the bladestorm pic was sweet :) |
#23  [128401] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
The writing was very clinical and could use a little colour. I too got confused at times, and I agree with Zergling that the forced upgrades updates broke the flow too much.
Overall the pics and text could just use some solid editing. Don't be afraid to discard parts or talk through parts faster if it's dragging the action down too much. Some of the pics were superfluous but there were some good ones as well.
7.5. Cheers,
~CB~ |
| #24 Ender[128404] |
| 128.226.37.133 |
like someone said too many upgrade numbers all over the place. i couldn't keep up with the action either because of the writing or lack of pretty pics with arrows or animated gifs (i love those =/ )
some pics were a bit dark and snow's text color was a little hard to see but i guess if there's a black spot in the middle of a textline that snow =/
Cheers,
~CB~2 |
| #25 Some_God[128405] |
| newark-ip-1-33.dynamic.ziplink.net |
The prob here that it WC3 =þ
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #26 Excelsior[128406] |
| dhcp9396103.columbus.rr.com |
Snow always bitches when he gets purple because the text color is hard to see. The report could've used some humor, god knows the game was full of it (nothing like drake fights). Other than a few random mistakes, "the Deathknight called down an infernal", and such, nice job. Except the parts that make me look stupid, bad, bad you.
I'd say it's a 7, because all the cool kids did too. |
| #27 DarkLord[128413] |
| 3.PPP.NBY1.enoreo.on.ca |
you guys are followers, stealling CB's "Cheers" its his "cheers" from him telling off TIME in a nice way. make up your own like: Amen, or something.
any way gw on the report the writing was sorta boring but 7-8 was a decent mark for this. keep it up |
| #28 Spincut[128416] |
| ts46-01-qdr657.trlck.ca.charter.com |
| Nice job, but, at times I found myself bored at what I was reading, so I started looking at the pretty pictures and reading the quotes instead (which were very good, by the way). Also, I got lost at times of what was going on. Overall, though, very nice. |
| #29 OmegaX[128427] |
| pool-209-158-237-117.cap.east.verizon.net |
| I think it was a great report |
| #30 Some_God[128431] |
| proxys.or3.marketscore.com |
Ok Dark... Oh I got one!!!!!
FUCK!!!!!,
~SG~
Better?
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #31 CyMaN[128450] |
| p50806E65.dip.t-dialin.net |
| ur the man some_god .. |
| #32 Flash of Death[128455] |
| 168.53.109.33 |
half my brain went dead while reading...
im sorry,I just like reading about night elf games...there more interesting
I scanned pictures and quotes...they were nice |
| #33 Flash of Death[128456] |
| 168.53.109.33 |
btw,you can download this program that allows you view old patch replays...1.03 came out yesterday...fixed farm bug,demon hunter bug(that must suck,makes demon hunter take 10 supply if he died in metamorphasis),other bugs..
I scanned the bugs and I didnt see the bug that fixes the ability to kill a lvl 10 dragon with peons
wich is very interesting
God I dont even have the f*cking game yet |
| #34 Flash of Death[128462] |
| 168.53.109.33 |
"Deathknight gets to level 6 and he slaps down an infernal"...
this report kept getting me confused |
| #35 [128479] |
| crtntx1-ar7-4-63-073-022.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
Are you dumb enough to think that a death knight cast an infernal when I have a level 6 Dread Lord? Chill dude, everyone makes mistakes
and wtf is so great about watching night elf games, they're almost always just who has more huntresses |
| #36 Some_God[128480] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
*this will be in gangsta/hilbily format*
Ya I gots dis huntress and she da bomb, son. You know what im sayin son? Tha nigga with tha upside down letters gots dat shit right... night elf???? is dat something from LOTR???
*Dis.. oops I mean this concludes the gangsta/hilbily format*
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #37 Flash of Death[128484] |
| ppp344-mfe.tiagris.net |
Thats the f*ckin point...I know death knight cant cast it...I just keep stumbling into many mistakes...
oh and as the night elfs,yes a cheap win is with mass huntresses...but some games include dryads and druids and hyppos wich are way more interisting than... riflemen at (2/1)...im just saying,who would report a mass huntress game anyway,thats boring...the only night elf reports ive read,with the exception of some,include dryands and druids and etc...I get really bored from reading...footmen at (2/2) Blah BALHAL BLAH ABLAHA BALHA BALAHA BALAH |
| #38 Flash of Death[128486] |
| ppp344-mfe.tiagris.net |
"Excel finishes his expansion as he is gathering troops in his main, he has 5 Sorcs(Adept) and 2 Footmen(2/0). Snow takes his group of 4 Ghouls(2/2) and 3 Necromancers(Master) ..."
"His LVL 6 (Almost 7) Hero, 4 (2/1) Grunts and 4 (Initiate) Shaman to Snow's natural, as Cow regroups his army of 7 (3/1) Abominations 2 (Adept) Necromancers and his LVL 5 Dreadlord just outside..."
VERSUS
"As I come to the demon hunter my mana is at 120 I wait for 5 more mana and cast a w.e. I had picked up a mana pot earlier from the first set of creeps, I knew I needed to use it now to get another elemental on the seen..."
"He’s almost dead though, I’ve been attacking it for the last 10 seconds at least, finally at 300 hitpoints I bolt him, the hitpoints drop to 36!!! Of course..."
--need I say more?
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| #39 Flash of Death[128488] |
| ppp344-mfe.tiagris.net |
| umm I fergot to mention,that its not the type of game,its how its written |
| #40 [128524] |
| crtntx1-ar7-4-63-073-022.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
Shut up, let's see you try to report
And I already said the style was kind of dry, and all your examples are from human games... what's so great about massing huntresses again? |
| #41 Flash of Death[128528] |
| ppp126-mfe.tiagris.net |
WHa wah??? you like cock?
Okay,I will,I have to install dreamweaver,and get a good game... oh and I dont look through all the comments because I actually have things to do...
for the author,your report is good,just work on the style...not saying that its really bad |
| #42 Some_God[128529] |
| 0-1pool120-4.nas8.somerville1.ma.us.da.qwest.net |
my spider sense is sensing some sort of gang rape ; )
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #43 [128530] |
| crtntx1-ar7-4-63-073-022.crtntx1.dsl-verizon.net |
You have to use dreamweaver?
Let's see you make some old-school SC reports using just notepad and MS Paint, see how you fare |
| #44 Flash of Death[128532] |
| ppp126-mfe.tiagris.net |
I use html,but I have no god damm time on my hands...oh and
coming soon:
Night Elf Gorrilla WarFare TATICS |
| #45 Flash of Death[128533] |
| ppp126-mfe.tiagris.net |
| I shouldnt be loggin on to this site,I gotta be studying for SAT's and writting 3 reports |
| #46 I_am_Nitros[128544] |
| h24-67-181-59.ok.shawcable.net |
any game with a lich is fun for me.. I just love the idea of incasing someone in ice.... then making the ice explode...
and....stuff...
!^-_-^! |
| #47 Flash of Death[128566] |
| 170.76.40.110 |
| Warcraft 3 is the right game for me...only because theres no boom strat...and few units...unlike starcraft where even ladder games end up with 200 supply with 6 gateways pumping non-stop units...unless ofcourse...when all the minerals are gone...thats the fun part :)...then its the battle of the left-over units,and you gotta micro like hell |
| #48 [128570] |
| nr11-216-196-186-234.fuse.net |
Night Elf Gorilla Tactics. Hahahaa.
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| #49 Flash of Death[128612] |
| 170.76.40.117 |
| HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA...LOL flash of deaht...what a looser |
| #50 I like milk shakes...do you?DO YOU???[128613] |
| 170.76.40.117 |
| I dont understand why night elfs dont make there attacks during the night...they can harass with shadowmeld,enemy focus firing on a huntress...shadowmeld it...enemy picks new target...make that huntress attack again,shadowmeld other unit,and focus fire on there units...or why dont they have archers lined up and firing shadowmeld...enemy walks away...fire...meld...fire...meld...enemy gets ticked off and makes way to base...uproot...possibly make an archer melded wall? or use ancients as meat shields to protect archers... |
| #51 The-Wc3-Master[128663] |
| oh-beechwood1e-25.clvhoh.adelphia.net |
| This report is my kinda game just love using strategy instead of kill the army go to base or defend and counter. |
| #52 Flash of...I fergot[128682] |
| ppp67-hrl.tiagris.net |
| uhh.... |
| #53 Redemption6[128685] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| okay this was okay. the writing was dry, and frankly boring. You made very little use of commas, and you had a lot of typos. Such as "deathknight leveled to 6 and slapped an infernal blahbalhb" u meant dreadlord right? and there were a few other instances of that. Your updates were too frequent, and long. |
| #54 Flash of Death[128697] |
| 168.53.109.33 |
| Human games...no...*just read the comment of idiocy from flying cow*...it was night elf versus human...description of how the human player was having trouble with a Demon Hunter |
| #55 Flash of Flash of Flash[128698] |
| 168.53.109.33 |
and when did I say I like to read about mass huntresses
MORON |
| #56 winchester[130140] |
| proxya.byu.edu |
Great game, but the writing was a little dry.
Why don't more people ffa with more than 4 people?
I personally would like to see what would happen with 12 ppl ffa. Wouldn't you?
Have you ever thought of a table of contence?
ie time, so that we can see where everyone is at the same time on the map.
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