| #1 MasseMan[129533] |
| h131n2fls34o899.telia.com |
1st
Thought that kinda sucks on this kind of reports |
| #2 Kulkusa[129534] |
| webcacheM02b.cache.pol.co.uk |
| when my eyes calm down ill read it properly but having no paragraphs it does make it hard to follow. |
| #3 Tichondrius[129535] |
| user-24-214-23-216.knology.net |
| 3rd... Nice Descriptions +10 points Crappy Background with no pics -1000 remaining points -990 points |
| #4 mick[129536] |
| 1Cust193.tnt8.bne1.da.uu.net |
bachomp..bachoooeychomp..bachooeychomp
not bad I suppose |
| #5 DarkRider[129537] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
| didnt you post a spam report earlier this week? |
| #6 Blarg[129539] |
| cache-dg07.proxy.aol.com |
| Not bad for something done from memory. |
| #7 2e722[129540] |
| cache211.156ce.scvmaxonline.com.sg |
| ^^ just add pics,background and alittle html in notepad wont be hard to let u get a good report. ^^ |
| #8 The Wise One[129543] |
| 150.208.98.21 |
| Well damn i just read over the report and found about 4 grammer usage errors. I promise a better report when i get time to do one at home with in game shots on a normal map. |
| #9 [129557] |
| dial-77-11.ots.utexas.edu |
| try to play on a blizzard map or something,fastest possible and zero clutter suck |
| #10 IcE-Inforcer[129558] |
| proxys.or4.marketscore.com |
Yes, Money Maps suck anus.
Next time give us some html, pix and a non-money map and u might get... silver. And ya dun forget to take out the spelling mistakes, I saw about 20 here, and my grammar sux.
P.s:DO NOT report on games that u owned, they're BORING.
-IcE- |
#11  [129560] |
| ppp480-mfe.tiagris.net |
Paragraph: A group of sentences that share the same topic
Use them next time |
#12  [129561] |
| 206.10.109.47 |
"After all you can’t expect much from a Microsoft Word report only from memory."
You have good writing ability. Although that is hard to judge by this report, I can see that if you would take time, you could do well. Read the guides.... blah blah... use pics... blah blah.... and add html to make better reports. They've already said not to do money maps, so just a more extensive layout will help you greatly. Also, paragraphs are our friends. :) |
#13  [129562] |
| 206.10.109.47 |
| oops, forgot the "> :( |
| #14 frankie[129565] |
| mkc-65-26-24-145.kc.rr.com |
| wow, a two one sided game? how is that possible? |
| #15 HamerHurlinHank[129579] |
| user-2ive1ra.dialup.mindspring.com |
| This was odd, it took 10 comments for someone to say something about how stupid this was because it was on a money map. WHAT HAS THE WORLD COME TO? |
#16  [129582] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
Your lack of confidence in your own work makes it hard for us to care about it. Try reporting on a better game with higher expectations and throw in a little more polish; you could probably do much better.
Cheers,
~CB~ |
| #17 The Wise One[129751] |
| 170.211.33.155 |
#9 and #10 if you would of read the end of the report you would of seen that i promised my next report would be done at home on a regular map with in game shots. How is it possible to get in game shots at school?
and #14 on comment #8 I explained that after i reread my report i noticed 4 grammer errors that two instead of too being one of them. |
| #18 The Wise One[129752] |
| 170.211.33.155 |
I apologise for the grammer/spelling errors, but i only had a hour period to type this up so i didn't have time to proof read it. However, if it means that much i'll point out my mistakes right now:
and hit "here" hatch from behind should be her
"kick goons" should be kick out goons
"finish his torn up of" should be finish his torn up base off
"similar faints" should be similar fates
"on there mind" should be on their mind
"the blue fox left" should be blue fox left
"two one sided" should be too one-sided
as for commas, semicolons, and colons i'm sure i left them out in places they should of been but finding those mistakes would waste too much of my current time so i don't think i'll bother
any thing else you see please point out i'm always looking to broaden my vocabulary |
| #19 The Wise One[129753] |
| 170.211.33.155 |
| grr apologise should be apologize i think |
| #20 Chris[129761] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
| Spell check, paragraphs, sentence structure is what you need. |
| #21 The Wise One[129808] |
| 170.211.33.155 |
| Paragraphs i do need but i don't think spell check would really help considering stuff like faints and two are words just the wrong word for the situation |
| #22 Chris[129859] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| Then revise it. Easy enough. |
| #23 The Wise One[130029] |
| 170.211.33.155 |
| Uh how do you revise reports that have already been submitted |
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