| #1 detomaso72[134289] |
| 12.152.0.194 |
| Hey, I fixed it!! What do you know. Amazing these computers. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks again for your patience and kind words. I will get the hang of these computers yet. :) |
| #2 -101st-Garand[134290] |
| cache-rh05.proxy.aol.com |
*sighs heavily*
No wub for the D-Day story. Where the hell are the raters, anyway? |
| #3 detomaso72[134291] |
| 12.152.0.194 |
| I read through it. I thought it was pretty good, but this is mainly a StarCraft community and for a battle report on a real battle to get rated highly here, it has to be exceptional. For instance I remember one about the Ardan that was pretty good. You may not belive this but some of what I wrote was autobiographical. I was with First Marine Corp, First Division in quai in 1968. I see you were or are with 82nd Airborne. Maybe if you wrote about your own experiances it would be more exciting for them?? I don't know, I can just barely figure out this computer stuff. |
| #4 corpus[134294] |
| 12-216-216-153.client.mchsi.com |
| Hmm pretty good. |
| #5 LameJoker[134297] |
| ip-209-23-2-44.modem.logical.net |
that was hilarious.
“Oh I am a master baiter Innocent, that’s one thing I can do
really well.”
Ok the thing with the probes was pretty twisted though. I loved the descriptions of the zerg.
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| #6 detomaso72[134311] |
| 147.knoxville-06rh16rt-ca.dial-access.att.net |
| Uhm, mr. forum maneger sir??? If you would please delete the other two so I don't look like a total tool I would sure appreciate it. He he. :) |
| #7 LameJoker[134336] |
| ip-209-23-3-171.modem.logical.net |
YOU SIR, are a comic genius. Did you mean to say "total tool"?
hmmm, gives me an idea..... |
| #8 ComicGenius[134337] |
| ip-209-23-3-171.modem.logical.net |
| I never knew that ANOTHER synonym for It was Johnson. That must have the second greatest number of synonyms in the English language. Strangely enough, the word with the most synonyms is intoxicated. Must be some sort of connection there.... |
| #9 detomaso72[134341] |
| 227.knoxville-05rh15rt-ca.dial-access.att.net |
| Yep, tool is cool! |
| #10 ScotTt[134345] |
| 128warp179.newtel.com |
...This was GOSU. I was confused about the end...you found this in a book store, or you wrote it? If you wrote it then I am forced to quote from #7. "YOU SIR, are a comic genius." This was nice. The frank humor about it caught be off guard, the ironic references were awesome, the overall affect was...well, gosu.
I'd love to see more of these, if you did indeed write it.
Bye,
Me |
| #11 Bert[134360] |
| 213.30.248.250 |
That was awesome.
I read it in the office and I almost collapsed trying to suppress hysterical laughter....
great stuff!
Regards
Norbert
"I would eat a mile of your shit just to smell where it came from"
I nearly fainted... |
| #12 detomaso72[134364] |
| 12.152.0.194 |
I did write this about two years ago. The ending was confusing because I added the part about finding this diary in a used book store so I could claim it wasn't my work in case you guys didn't like it. Sort of like a second chance built right in.
As far as writting more I plan to but not as a fanfic. Fanfics are too boring because it doesn't have cool pix. I will try and write a battle report but I will have to see if I can get a friend of my son's to help me with it. It may take a while doing it this way, but I believe in quality not quantity. I am overjoyed by the positive response I have recieved so far and I am encouraged now that I can do something that will entertain my fellow StarCraft fans. :) |
| #13 jimmy[134438] |
| cvpp-p-144-138-156-42.prem.tmns.net.au |
He, as someone said in an earlier comment section, Drefsab, .Praetor and HeartCutter would be all proud.
-NOTjimmy |
| #14 Dagger[134468] |
| clarendon.sboe.org |
| Holy shit, that's long. ;D;D |
| #15 ComicGenius[134483] |
| ip-209-23-0-221.modem.logical.net |
Stone the rater that gave this a 7.
hmm was it a 7? too lazy to look. |
| #16 jimmy[134492] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-206-33.prem.tmns.net.au |
it is a seven
-NJ |
| #17 iNsOm[134791] |
| evrtwa1-ar13-4-62-067-041.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| it was great |
| #18 mutamonster[135090] |
| peoria-filter1.illinois.net |
| Sweet Story! |
| #19 lurkerburger7[135690] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| how long did this take u. it looks like a waste of time. |
| #20 detomaso72[135944] |
| 12.152.0.194 |
| Well there lurkerburger it took about three weeks at lunch time. It was time that I could waste. |
| #21 jimmy[136246] |
| 144.139.223.201 |
Wasted time...
IS GOOD!!
em. yes. last.
-NJ
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| #22 Sv)Irradiate[136862] |
| 208.214.188.62 |
| pure genius, I for one would love to read more of these. I usually dont come to br but I think i will now just to see if more of these come up. Vultures were the best. |
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