| #1 [138185] |
| h24-67-140-67.cc.shawcable.net |
| 1st |
| #2 2Cautious[138188] |
| adsl-68-72-82-52.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| 2nd! |
| #3 2Cautious[138189] |
| adsl-68-72-82-52.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
Pretty good. Somehow I couldn't find the Sea Witch on the site, but maybe that's just me. Some of your pictures seemed to be a little squished, so definitely fix that. Also do use proper grammar in respect to there/their. Very distracting if you don't. Otherwise, gj.
7-7.5 |
| #4 silk[138190] |
| 24.247.106.22.gha.mi.chartermi.net |
yea, some of the new things are not on blizz's site yet, i just linked to the area that they will be when it is updated. sorry, i was never very good at grammar so their :)
sorry about th squished images, was running out of time and neeed to fit them in real quick. next report will have larger pics and more of them. as it is it takes around 3-4 hrs to do these ;/ |
| #5 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[138192] |
| cache-da05.proxy.aol.com |
| 3-4 hours? I can slap a report together in 20 minutes! |
| #6 sHabbO[138193] |
| ip68-4-29-84.pv.oc.cox.net |
Nice report, could fix up grammar and spelling, pix gave me a headache for a little bit, but i liked seeing the Naga's tornado do jack. LoL. Maybe a closer game next time? It seemed one-sided throughout to me.
7 |
| #7 Graograman[138194] |
| cr20068187167.cable.net.co |
| GJ, could work a lil on grammar, but thx a whole lot for taking the time to take all those screenshots! |
| #8 Gimpler[138195] |
| 219.94.75.211 |
Completely Boring. I could see who was going to win within the first few paragraphs. We want tension! We want suspense! WE WANT A GOOD BR!
6.5 |
| #9 celix[138202] |
| h24-84-33-2.vc.shawcable.net |
| html white bar just like one of mick's brs :P |
| #10 SiX5532ONE[138203] |
| client-151-198-243-110.qdx-it.com |
Cool man - want to see more.
Just a couple of things:
Polish your pics, try not to distort them.
The addition of the reference links is a good touch, but maybe open in a new window?
<a href="somefile.htm" target="_blank"> or
<a href="timesucks.htm" target="_new">
Would tell you to get a better game, but then you already knew that.
MORE FROZEN THRONE. |
| #11 silk[138206] |
| 24.247.106.22.gha.mi.chartermi.net |
| white bar is there so i can set the table background to use an image. next time i promise to get a very good game and it will be a night elf vs undead game. probably monday night early next week. will put links in new windows, good idea. will also make the grammar much better. I need to take more time on the written part of it. also, larger and more pictures so we can get a better idea of whats going on :) |
| #12 Notjim[138233] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
I liked this, but pics = screwage.
7.5 |
| #13 Psyonic_Reaver[138245] |
| 1Cust167.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
How the hell did this get an 8?
No offense Silk but your writing isnt all the great and your pictures hurt my eyes. The white bar can be easily fixed by adjusting the width and height, if you want an example go to one of BR's and right-click on it and view its source.
6 |
| #14 ZerG~LinG[138251] |
| p447-19.ppp.get2net.dk |
I agree with Psy, an 8 might just be a bit too much, but hey.
Nice to see you pumping some Frozen Throne reports, thanks very much. Try using a bit more time on each report, get someone to check the grammer (the their/there thing hurts my brain).
People already commented on the pics, and I can only agree, they were completely useless. Try getting bigger pics that show a lot, instead of 10 small pics. I can't remember how the white bar is made but I think it has something to do with correct table tags and such. Remeber to close them properly.
Now that my comp is back i need to get a beta report out :O |
| #15 Psyonic_Reaver[138257] |
| 1Cust251.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Now that I finally got into the beta I'll help ya Ling. ^^ |
| #16 LameJoker[138263] |
| pool-129-44-14-165.alb.east.verizon.net |
pics = evil
ya, I think good players would help. just a lil. |
| #17 Notjimmy[138298] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-206-41.prem.tmns.net.au |
| Damnit! So Many Observers! One Must Have Been Dropped! |
| #18 AvaiL[138367] |
| c-24-30-250-7.va.client2.attbi.com |
"CougH" cough cough
Ling come to asia server -_- |
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