| #1 GeneralPatton[143739] |
| cache-ntc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| Yay, first! Now to read... |
| #2 el_sux0r[143740] |
| 0-1pool57-105.nas40.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
This story arc will follow a different storyline than Eldritch's.
Because all of our hard work is for your edification.
-el_sux0r |
| #3 el_sux0r[143741] |
| 0-1pool57-105.nas40.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
| Oooh, someone stole first from me. I'm moving up in the world . . . |
| #4 Razoriel[143742] |
| Pit-Cache-3.nsw.bigpond.net.au |
| How much to register EV:N? I want to buy it (even though I can't download anything at the moment because of an exceeded limit). |
| #5 el_sux0r[143744] |
| 0-1pool21-138.nas31.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
| As always, set your text size to Medium or Smaller. That should help. |
| #6 el_sux0r[143745] |
| 0-1pool21-138.nas31.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
| Incidentally, Convid, what browser are you using? IE displays this fine, though I'll admit I haven't checked with other browsers. |
| #7 EldritchEvil[143746] |
| nr11-216-196-186-152.fuse.net |
Hey, cool! Another EV:N report. Nice to see. A few problems, though:
First, and I don't know wether or not this is just my browser, but your text is black on a black background. Also, your pictures and/or collages seem to cause a big H-Scroll. Let me go troubleshoot. |
| #8 EldritchEvil[143752] |
| nr11-216-196-186-152.fuse.net |
OK, I got the H-Scroll to go away (don't ask me how) and read the report via highlighting. I can now comment on it:
The humor was well-placed and a hell of a lot funnier than mine.
The writing was good. Not much else to say about it.
The images... Now, I'm no image whiz like Ling or Breeze, but try cropping them next time. They were unneccesarily huge and often contained a large amount of useless things, such as stars or empy space. Also, I can see you liked my "Ships say things in the pictures" style. :D
(CONTINUED, CURSE THE CHARACTER LIMIT) |
| #9 EldritchEvil[143753] |
| nr11-216-196-186-152.fuse.net |
(CONTINUED FROM ABOVE, CURSE THE CHARACTER LIMIT)
It needed to be a little longer, in my opinion. Ended too soon, with the majority of the length being pictures. However, I still thought what writing there was, was good.
Overall, I would say this is fine competetion (don't worry, it's not a replacement, and yes, there IS another Journey into the Stars BR on it's way) for my BRs. Thanks for all the kudos, and imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. However, since we can't very well have two sets of the same BR running about, I'll have to change my style somewhat...
Nice work.
8 |
| #10 LuckyLefty01[143758] |
| adsl-67-119-194-255.dsl.pltn13.pacbell.net |
Not a bad report, shows up black on black for me too though(using camino) and please us title tags next time instead of alt, otherwise i have to go into the source cose to read the alt text.
6.5-7.5 or so i.m.o
Good job
-Lucky |
| #11 Convider[143774] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3661168.sympatico.ca |
| usually if you're not using a alt-text viewing browser (such as mozilla) right-click on click on protperties on the image. it should display it or something |
| #12 EldritchEvil[143775] |
| nr11-216-196-208-77.fuse.net |
| Convider: Nope, there is no properties option. We're using macs here. |
| #13 el_sux0r[143779] |
| bay3-12.dial.umd.edu |
Ahhh, whoops. Let me look at that.
EE, I give props to you for pioneering this. |
| #14 EldritchEvil[143781] |
| nr11-216-196-186-191.fuse.net |
| Eh, I just had the opportunity and wish to do it. Anyone with the game and an image editor who knew of the site could have done it. What I am proud of is that I did it, in my mind at least, well. |
| #15 Sabotage[143909] |
| pool-68-161-107-106.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Suxor I've decided to accept the joint report. After my 10 th i will make one with you. |
| #16 sabotage[143910] |
| pool-68-161-107-106.ny325.east.verizon.net |
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