| #1 Giga[147367] |
| krajina.yubc.net |
I cannot for the life of me get that background behind the actual BR to show black and not that disguisting white -_-
Ah well, its been a while, hope you guys like this little thing. Methinks I'll be making BR#11 soon, that one will be back in good ol' WC3.
Anyway: COMMENTS!!! |
| #2 endersshadow[147368] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
I didn't read all of it because I tend to despise Morrowind, but it looked good. The background on the pictures and the overall background all did an excellent job of making it look darker, as well as the scary werewolf pictures ;O
A little short, and the huge beginning words to each paragraph got a little irritating (are you using <h2>!?), but overall nice job.
7.5
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| #3 endersshadow[147369] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
| Ah screw it I'll read it anyway; I know now how much effort goes into making these T_T. |
| #4 Giga[147370] |
| krajina.yubc.net |
| I added those big words for that bookish effect, kinda thought they looked cool =) |
| #5 Some_God[147371] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
| umm... 3rd? |
| #6 el_sux0r[147373] |
| dialup-64.157.186.144.Dial1.Washington1.Level3.net |
Slightly marred by tense changes and minor grammatical errors (I'm sure we don't care about those anyhow ;). A good read otherwise.
I'm guessing 7. |
| #7 el_sux0r[147374] |
| dialup-64.157.186.144.Dial1.Washington1.Level3.net |
| Oh yeah, PS: it seemed kind of short. I'm assuming you'll have subsequent BRs though, and those will contain yet more explanation. =) |
| #8 goldrush945[147376] |
| wc01.mtnk.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Bleh; I hate Morrowind, but that BR was a bit short. |
| #9 Desert Demon[147379] |
| c-24-125-98-163.va.client2.attbi.com |
| Couple of things that have been addressed, the grammar, and the tense changes (bad! bad!!). I also found a few spelling errors, which threw me off for a second. The tone was pretty good, but one part I didn't like said something like "He became invisible to everyone but us." I think you could have just went with a silp into invisibility, without the whole thing about us being able to see him; IMO that would have worked better. Also, maybe my monitor, but a couple pics weren't exceptionally clear, so I stuck to the text more. Other than this stuff, I liked it, so I'll say 7. |
| #10 Desert Demon[147380] |
| c-24-125-98-163.va.client2.attbi.com |
| Also, I would use "through" instead of "thru"...the latter seems more informal, which didn't match the tone. |
| #11 Convider[147382] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3662810.sympatico.ca |
6.999999999
Good idea, bad execution |
| #12 Giga[147383] |
| krajina.yubc.net |
| Actualy there's a long story behind that BR. You see, I haven't played Morrowind:Bloodmoon (or any Morrowind for that matter) for over... well for over 5 months or so. I've started making this BR during last summer and then just got bored with it and forgot it (was workin' on my book which I finished a week ago and am now workin' on my 4th novela). Yesterday I just felt like writting a BR (didn't feel like workin' on my 4th book). However I didn't exacly feel like watching a WC3 replay and takin' screenshots so, hell, why not finish the experiment that is "Bedtime Story"? I finished it and here it is, I think it is nice, considering I never had the time to proof read it =P |
| #13 endersshadow[147384] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
I actually liked this report, but the story element was a little 'ick' as Eldritch would say.
"...old priest's meat is still hanging from its jaws."
Calm down man :P
And I realized that the large opening words were for a book effect; I meant to say that maybe you could make the first letter of each 'chapter' large instead of the entire word.
I still think a 7-7.5 rating, although it would topple my reign at the top of the gold list =[. |
| #14 BlueRibbon[147385] |
| bgm-24-169-60-199.stny.rr.com |
I thought I was going to have to slap you enders for not reading it and offering a rating but now I don't :}.
I heard this game sucks your life away. Does it really take like a day or two to get from town to town. That would suck balls. :O
7 |
| #15 endersshadow[147386] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
| I made that mistake on Napoleic's last report :( |
| #16 the-nut[147388] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| lol i remember one wet war |
| #17 Some_God[147395] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
| Werent you banned? Or are you using a different computer? |
| #18 spellchecker[147396] |
| c68.190.163.141.eau.wi.charter.com |
| detracts |
| #19 Giga[147397] |
| krajina.yubc.net |
Me? Banned? Of course not... (I s'pose you're talkin' to me Some_God), anyway I changed my internet provider so I have another IP.
Also, the-nut, EVERYONE remembers One Wet War =) |
| #20 endersshadow[147398] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
| Some_God was talking to the-nut who was recently banned, and even more recently unbanned. |
| #21 The0ne[147404] |
| redback-6.shoreham.net |
| I'm going to have nightmares now. . . |
| #22 Eversun[147411] |
| 66.44.173.120 |
| Link to those novelas? I like how you write, and would be interested in seeing these. |
| #23 Giga[147421] |
| krajina.yubc.net |
Eversun, those novelas are all written on Serbian (writting BRs in English is a whole lot easier then writting real books... at least for someone to whom English isn't a native language) and none of them is available on the internet.
Don't worry, once I publish a book and it gets translated I'll let you guys know ;) |
| #24 Smeagol[147448] |
| 211.27.66.180 |
heh i got this game free with my videocard but i havent played it yet so i cant say if its good or not.
from the reviews ive seen though its a pretty good game
btw giga plz hurry up with ur wc3 br
i need a fix!!!!!!!!! |
| #25 the-nut[147792] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| ughh morowind.. that game is so boring |
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