| #1 rigbieys[147497] |
| bbcache-9.singnet.com.sg |
| Nice. Keep on writing. |
| #2 Roshee[147498] |
| 81.198.131.70 |
"I have no oil resource, and no one will trade it with me... But the little Russian town of Kiev has oil, and I'm gonna take it down like a drunken prom queen!" - Johnny_Vegas
Kiev is the capital city of Ukraine :(. Hall of Fame or not but people should learn the basics of geography ;_;.
Other then that, what a nice report! It lacks the glitter, but it has the raw stuff right there. 7/10! |
| #3 Roshee[147499] |
| 81.198.131.70 |
| *! Unless Johnny_Vegas wrote that in the 80s, in that case I apologize. |
| #4 Poor_lil_Newb[147500] |
| h64-141-24-13.sunwave.net |
I can't view the report =/
OMFG THE INTERNET IS GAY |
| #5 endersshadow[147504] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
The battle was interesting (towers, starfall, and tanks, oh my!) but ultimately I think you could've found a better game without 23% players.
Writing was fine for me, but the pictures were annoying. Some were just plain blurry *shudders* and I would've liked them centered or with a border around them.
That's the end of my ramble, keep going.
7.5 |
| #6 Some_God[147506] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
| Nice to see that new reporters are coming in... with repots coming in everyday. Lets keep this site rollin'. |
| #7 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[147508] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice, only complaint is the pics are distorted and the writing could use some work, but it's a hell of a lot better than most writing submitted by new people. |
| #8 Chris[147509] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
| All your shit is shifted to the left, but good job. |
| #9 holyjlc933[147511] |
| pool-138-88-136-228.esr.east.verizon.net |
| ditto |
| #10 n00dles[147512] |
| p5090128D.dip0.t-ipconnect.de |
nice job
at first i was a little concerned because in a 4vs4 it is always kinda hard to follow the whole plot but you did a good job keeping the reader online.
a few improvement ideas:
- introduction was too long. the pics of the starting bases were unnecessary (everyone knows what they look like)although the introduction of the players was a good idea
- as endersshadow pointed out already, the pictures were kinda blurry and in the beginning some pics also were stretched/bend. looks awful (maybe you should do one or more collages of the early-game battlepics) and combine it with the text
i would say an 8.0 overall (report itself was good, but style needs improvement) |
| #11 striz[147515] |
| CPE0007e95ea1fa-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| I saw the pic distortion and skipped the rest. sorry. I might come back to read though, school's starting up again so god knows I'm going to be killing a lot of time around here. |
| #12 2Cautious[147518] |
| adsl-68-21-5-196.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| Mkay, thanks for the advice. I think next time I do a BR, I'll try not to do it all in 1 day (thus giving me more time to work on the pictures). |
#13  [147523] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Righto. Let's take from the beginning.
Good job for a first report, but it definetely has its problems. The 4v4 setup is possibly one of the least fitted to battlereporting, it's a bitch to follow, and the lack of minimaps or maybe a (Team 2) behind the names made it even worse. I lost total interest in the game, which was kind of a shame.
You should try to make your writing a bit more engaging, as it's current form is a slightly drab experience. The only was to achive this is to read and write more, I suggest some HOF br's to get you started :)
Lastly, pictures. There are a few things I find weird. When you link the picture (the html), you dont include a file extension like .jpg, so it's something a miracle they actually showed up. Having looked at them, I'm guessing they were .bmp's, which take of a WHOLE lot of space (400kb for a picture of a town hall?). Glad I don't have a modem anymore. Also they seem streched and distorted, for some reason or another. |
| #14 [147524] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
- continued -
I recommend a .jpg format for the pictures, and avoid streching size at all.
To summarize, experience is the best teacher, and if you crank out a few more reports, you're bound to go gold before long.
Until then, 6. |
| #15 2Cautious[147546] |
| adsl-68-21-162-153.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| I'm pretty sure they're jpg files. I converted them all to that & then uploaded them here, but changed their names not including the .jpg which is why there is no extension in the HTML. |
| #16 Smeagol[147553] |
| 211.27.66.65 |
Ya those pics kinda hurt my modem and they kinda sucked to so... what Z~L said :p
Gj and write more if u fix up the pix (how cool is that "fix up the pix" lol... on second thoughts no) u'll be sure to get golds in the 8's
Its certainly good to see some more wc3 br's (thou i cant exactly say the skill lvl was anything great :p but ull get better)
write more!!!!!!!!!!! |
| #17 el_sux0r[147600] |
| dhcp078132.res-hall.northwestern.edu |
Both your writing and presentation could use a little variety. You can get a gold on your next report if you work hard.
"My hippos fly to the remaining tower quickly, and start to destroy it. Green desperately tries to mass teleport in to save it, but just as he arrives, the tower falls and it's A WIN FOR MY TEAM!!!!"
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| #18 Man_of_Socks[147702] |
| wh120-00-0c-41-44-4e-a7.northwestel.net |
| I hate you, you are the bane of my existance. Mass air bastards like you are the ones that give 4v4 such a bad reputations. I hope you have a freak shaving accident riddling your face with little non lethal, but infinitvly annoying and irritating cuts. Then i hope they get infected and that birds start making nests in them. I have spoken |
| #19 2Cautious[147722] |
| adsl-68-22-193-147.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| Love you too, Ma_of_Socks. |
| #20 aaronkeg[154083] |
| c-67-167-77-99.client.comcast.net |
jk_1985 is a cheater he used pick on me and took my anni plzzz get it back for me lol im mad!!!!!!!!!
i hate cheaters i would like to pick him back now but i wont sooo plzzz helm me get it back!!!
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| #21 aaronkeg[154084] |
| c-67-167-77-99.client.comcast.net |
| jk_1985 |
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