| #1 Some_God[147848] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
| Weeeee 1st ;) |
| #2 BlueRibbon[147849] |
| 65.167.44.51 |
| Well apart from the grammar errors, and occasioal repeating of several phrases, I kind of liked this. |
| #3 Poor_lil_Newb[147850] |
| h64-141-25-229.sunwave.net |
| Entiresting |
| #4 {DD}Fatboy[147851] |
| adsl-66-124-232-135.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Interesting, but massively lacking in detail. Also, wasn't too coherant; I was confused as to who the emperor had disintegrated. |
#5 
[147852] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
4 paragraphs?
Started out well - elaborate on the story. |
| #6 Inoxx[147853] |
| rdu168-177-181.nc.rr.com |
| more |
| #7 UltraWolf[147854] |
| usilis02.ca.com |
| Thanks everyone for the feedback. I am adding more detail and checking the grammar of the zerg portion of the story and will post it soon. |
| #8 woot[147855] |
| ip68-107-203-17.nc.hr.cox.net |
| 1st |
| #9 Some_God[147857] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
| I guess #8 is using .000000000001k |
| #10 Some_God[147858] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
| connection. :) |
| #11 deathgod[147860] |
| jupiter.singnet.com.sg |
somehow i agree lol
he must have missed the earlier posts :s |
| #12 LS[147862] |
| 138.227.189.9 |
i got a bit confused over who the diff races were. Is da story 'bout toss?
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| #13 rigbieys[147873] |
| bbcache-14.singnet.com.sg |
i hate this :(
add more detail and maybe ill read |
| #14 Chris[147876] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
| Delete. Do not post any sort of report without it being finished. |
| #15 In the spirit of experimentation...[147933] |
| 129.252.135.109 |
| Здравствуйте |
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