| #1 SandTrap[148387] |
| sandcastle.resnet.tamu.edu |
First, but on something shitty :(.
*cries*
btw I didn't even read, it didn't look pretty. |
#2 
[148388] |
| x1-6-00-03-2f-15-92-e5.k173.webspeed.dk |
Hmmm.
I'll go out on a limb here, and say that you're under 12 years. Most people can't write very well at this age, and maybe it's better to just hold it off for a few years, yes?
You use inserted senteces (yeah not like pervert lolz kek) all the time, and it's a pain to read, as it's not so much a flowing text, but more of a few lines slapped together, often making little sense.
3 |
| #3 Psyonic_Reaver[148389] |
| dialup-67.25.65.196.Dial1.Portland1.Level3.net |
Reminds me of my first report except this kid used HTML.
Yeah I would say get some friends to proof-read or get somebody around here who is willing.
Another way to check your writing or layout is to look at some better reporters style.
Zerg~Ling, ~CattleBruiser~, Mark4. And copy their HTML style. Now I'm not saying steal their report but I think its ok to get some help. =)
3 |
| #4 OverTheUnder[148390] |
| 207.28.249.74 |
| Don't do reports>< some of us just aren't made to be reporters :/ but im happy to say i could do worse:P |
| #5 Chris[148391] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
| Delete for being spam. |
| #6 striz[148392] |
| CPE0007e95ea1fa-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Deleted for being a crime against humanity. |
| #7 MH[148394] |
| cache-ntc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| my maphacking one was better than this rofl |
| #8 Chris[148395] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
| Don't any of the raters recognize flame bait when they see it? |
| #9 Chris[148396] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
And zerg~ling doesn't know how to rate either.
This is easy 1.5 or 2.0 material. 3.0 is way too high. |
| #10 Mr.Puddles[148398] |
| 216.49.241-DSL-93.ckt.net |
| Looks 3 material to me... I have seen worse get 3's so it's alright. |
| #11 choboPeon[148399] |
| ool-182faa3c.dyn.optonline.net |
10?
:)
Keep working :) |
| #12 LoZeR-X[148408] |
| adsl-68-78-238-88.dsl.mdsnwi.ameritech.net |
| Take more time on your work. A battle report is not diffrent from a painting, or a well made short story. It takes time and drive to make it work. If a game is really good, then you should have plenty from replays, screenshots, and text logs to create something more accessable and desireable then a text log with strange symbols all over. |
| #13
[148414] |
| x1-6-00-03-2f-15-92-e5.k173.webspeed.dk |
:p 1 / 2 / 3 what difference does it make -.-
And if it's flame bait, it's even more sad. |
| #14 Chris[148440] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
| Look, across the board! Its a silver, bronze and spam parade! |
| #15 BlueRibbon[148455] |
| 65.167.44.85 |
| Haha nice joke report. Err wait.. um nevermind... |
| #16 TwistedPaladin[148528] |
| lsanca1-ar54-4-3-193-255.lsanca1.dsl-verizon.net |
Erm, I guess a 3 would work. I thought that it was actually okay, for the most part. I know, I know, it looks a little weird, but he did (somewhat) describe stuff. The only thing I didn't get it why it said things like Dreadlord|s or something...
An okay 1st report. |
| #17 SPHS-Shadow[149088] |
| 65.249.246.27 |
wtf is going on. i cant tell what the hell he is trying to say.
i think it was something about screwing some guy's ass, or enjoying the company of perverts, or something along that line. dude man, you blow. get better at typing or something, cause my eyes are hurting. i gotta go lay down before all the jacked up symbols and jumbled up words cause my brain to go son-of-sam on someone's ass. SHEEEIIIIIT.
SPHS-Shadow out, see yah. |
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