| #1 maareek[149419] |
| mblt-aa063.gtcom.net |
| Hope y'all enjoy it. |
| #2 mEo_[149420] |
| arhs-129.arhs.EDnet.NS.CA |
nice... there is an upgrade war to be fought too ^^;
should have gone greater spire |
| #3 PeaceableGhost[149421] |
| adsl-68-73-52-213.dsl.sfldmi.ameritech.net |
| Nice job...well put together. *Almost* ruined the effect by spelling "fares" "fairs" at the very end there. |
| #4 maareek[149422] |
| mblt-aa063.gtcom.net |
| ouch, I'll try to check it over a little better next time, thanks though. |
| #5 BlueRibbon[149423] |
| 65.167.44.42 |
| Nice. 7. |
| #6 .Praetor[149424] |
| dhcp63.des.ucdavis.edu |
Good alt-text :). A couple of things that could really help: spelling out words like zealots and zerglings, not abbreviating them (you can type it that way, then search and replace later). Also, HTML frequently screws with standard paragraphs, always put an empty line between them.
It was an all-right report, though you tried to sell it as gosu players while not really making me appreciate their skills. The pictures were pretty good though. I'll give it a 7 I think. Gold! |
| #7 .Praetor[149425] |
| dhcp63.des.ucdavis.edu |
| P.S. I never really like the 'you walk into a room' style of writing. Standard prose seems to be better to me. Readers like to be disembodied observers. If they want to imagine themselves as part of the action, they can take over the persona of one of the characters. |
#8 
[149426] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Pretty solid report. Making your writing a bit more interesting could help. Content-wise, look at what Napoleic (and many others of course, but good example) is doing with his Broodwar BR's - moves get analysed, possible counters / strats get evaluated in the given situation. Good stuff. Make it engaging!
I liked your pictures, clean and large/numerous enough that you could see what was going on.
7 |
| #9
[149427] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
| Gasp, praetor beat me to it :) |
| #10 maareek[149428] |
| mblt-aa063.gtcom.net |
Thanks, guys. I'll remember that.
Who knew that alt-text shit would work, lol. |
| #11 BulletSponge[149430] |
| cache-ntc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
Good report. I don't really care for the 'SC theater' aspect, since, as Praetor said, I like to just pay attention to the game for game's sake.
Pictures could use a little work. Try to make them more interesting, and don't waste screen shots on a shot that isn't filled with gore (unless it's an important shot, like a base montage). Pics of units just moving around isn't much to look at.
Nice Alt-Text, though. Monty Python = god.
I'd give it a 7.5
I hope I've helped a bit.
Stupid British Ka-nnnnnigits! |
| #12 Lithium[149431] |
| cache-rf01.proxy.aol.com |
I liked it. Everyone else has pretty much covered the details.
7.5. |
| #13 BlueRibbon[149432] |
| 65.167.44.98 |
| Your mother was a hampster, and your father smelt of eldaberries! :D |
| #14 maareek[149433] |
| mblt-ac083.gtcom.net |
I guess it's a good thing I ran out of ideas and started quoting movies lol. I figured everybody would know the monty python ones, but anybody know where the other one's came from?
Thanks for the comments, everybody. |
| #15 ProXy[CF][149434] |
| sdn-ap-029tnnashP0220.dialsprint.net |
| Solid 7 |
| #16 Chris[149435] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
Fun game. Alt text was great, and got trite at the end. Good trite though.
Keep making them.
7.0 |
| #17 Dibbler[149436] |
| 194.151.4.99 |
| ok, I take back the not liking you comment from yesterday. Actually paid more attention to the alt-text then the report. :) |
| #18 maareek[149443] |
| mblt-aa030.gtcom.net |
<3 Dibb
I guess stealing alt-text was actually a good idea after all. |
| #19 LoZeR-X[149446] |
| adsl-68-73-106-46.dsl.mdsnwi.ameritech.net |
Its a good effort. Pictures helped move it along, and the writing was a little sparse on depth as said before, but not too bad for a first shot.
Alt text could use some work though. Don't diss yourself in your alt text. You wouldn't have submitted this if you didn't think it was gold right?
7.5 |
| #20 maareek[149449] |
| mblt-aa030.gtcom.net |
| That's just a style thing. Most of my humor is self-depricating, so that kind of has to show through in my writing. |
| #21 Decay[149451] |
| 66.44.173.220 |
| Pretty good report. Some of the pics were kind of unnecessary, although I'm glad they were there, so that I could read some of the alt text. :D |
| #22 Convider[149454] |
| HSE-Hamilton-ppp291717.sympatico.ca |
| 7. Some of your pics are broken, and I don't really enjoy that whole "SC Theatre" approach. And capitalize your name! |
| #23 Der Fuhrer[149460] |
| ip225.goldnet.it |
Blah blah blah, comment all the hell you want, but I give it a 0 (Would someone plz read MY report...ONLY 19 comments and I have the same score).
Joking
7
Good
I
AM
GHOST |
| #24 JoeUser[149463] |
| cs24360-8.austin.rr.com |
| I saw my name in the alt+text. It is kind of a bummer that on this computer I can ONLY see alt+text. I could not enjoy the pictures. Personally, I thought the 2nd game would have been much better to BR. )ToT(Strafe has such good toss style, those of you who havn't seen it, strafe goes GOON+REAVER+SAIR instead of standard zeal+templar+archon. Strafe=most stylish toss, or perhaps he knew he would win so he was just showing off. Either way... |
| #25 maareek[149466] |
| mblt-ac017.gtcom.net |
I'm planning on doing part 2 as well, that's why there's a part 1 in the title ;). I wanted to do both of them and well, 1 normally comes before 2.
And I'm far too dumb to come up with alt-text for 2 games in 1 report. |
| #26 EMS[149503] |
| 143.229.174.219 |
Hrmm...
To be truthful, though i love stargate this didn't really seem like that good of a game. Kinda blew its load pretty fast, but fairly well done:
8
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| #27 reader[149599] |
| 167.127.163.141 |
1) Don't capitalize your name if you don't want to.
2) Begin with a beginning? Be redundant with the word redundant?
3) Excellent use of the mini-map! I'd like to see them a little larger, though.
4) Great job, but more strategic reasoning, por favor.
5) Lumburgh - Office Space
6) . . . pick up sticks
7-8) . . . lay them straight
9-- okay, so I'm done now! :)
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| #28 maareek[149647] |
| mblt-aa077.gtcom.net |
| :) Somebody actually knew the "Office Space" quotes! Thanks for the comments. |
| #29 wakiki[150162] |
| cable-68-184-58-201.mtv.al.charter.com |
Hehe, maar, I'm reading through all of your BRs.
For some reason, your picture don't show up in Internet Explorer. However, they do show up in Mozilla, so if anyone ever has problems viewing your pictures, tell them to use Mozilla ;)
I like the report.
Uncapitalized names rule!!!!1!1!1!1one!1!11one!!!11shift!11shift!one!11!1semicolon
<3 |
| #30 maareek[150169] |
| mblt-ac051.gtcom.net |
;p
much <3 for wakiki, I'm such a comment whore
And I was worried nobody would ever read any of my reports more than once...besides me of course ;). |
| #31 wakiki[150184] |
| cable-68-184-58-201.mtv.al.charter.com |
Hah, whoa! You actually still read these :D
I suppose, whenever I get around to doing BR(i.e. never), I will probably check the comments daily as well, even well after they are released :) |
| #32 maareek[150791] |
| mblt-aa079.gtcom.net |
I'm sure you will after you put out that br which won't be long right? Right!? :) <3
And I don't check them daily...only every other day or so. |
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