| #1 MaD~_~CoW[149904] |
| pool-138-89-168-216.mad.east.verizon.net |
hahahahaha
FS is a silly goose
ya went a lil crazy with those pictures didn't you? :o |
| #2 RiSE[149905] |
| oh-napoleon1c-177.clvhoh.adelphia.net |
| DD did feedback?! HAHA |
| #3 maareek[149906] |
| mblt-aa076.gtcom.net |
K, haven't read it yet, will in a minute
btw, whatever comment i am!
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| #4 Dibbler[149907] |
| 213-84-180-234.adsl.xs4all.nl |
| Scrolled through it, will read it later. Good job putting out a report (mine prolly never will TT) |
| #5 Desert Demon[149908] |
| user-0ce2kji.cable.mindspring.com |
Hot damn! I'm in a report that's not by me!
Couple comments...there were a few bits where the writing had grammatical/spelling mistakes or just plain typos that made it a little hard to read. Also, the whole states thing got a little confusing, especially with my color being green in the text (hun?). Finally, some of the pics were hard to make sense of because the borders between various sections were...well, not there. That kinda made it hard to see what was going on.
But good report anyways :) |
| #6 FlyingSquirrel[149909] |
| pc-24-151-22-092.newm2.ct.charter.com |
| I was going to scrap the country thing, but I got to far in to it. I didn't really proofread, and the green text wouldn't change red! I tried hex, I tried typing red, still green :(. |
| #7 maareek[149913] |
| mblt-aa076.gtcom.net |
It did get somewhat confusing, but still good. And very good for a first attempt. Most first timers don't even know html much less use pictures. *cough* My name was misspelled in the first image...not that I mind. I agree with what DD said, even about being in a report not done by myself ;).
That said, nice report. A little honing and I think you'll be receiving golds. |
| #8 Lithium[149914] |
| cache-dtc-ac19.proxy.aol.com |
| Not bad. 6. Keep em coming! |
| #9 wakiki[149915] |
| cable-24-196-29-48.mtv.al.charter.com |
| 10, time to read |
| #10 wakiki[149916] |
| cable-24-196-29-48.mtv.al.charter.com |
Done :)
Overall, I thought the actual writing was good, but you seriously need to proofread the text next time, or you can send it to me :) Also, the description of the map was good, but it might have been good to explain that only half of them had ramps. Overall, your description of the game was accurate and interesting, except for those typos, and the color problem.
Overall, I would give it just below a gold - is that a 6.5 or 7.5? Anyways, you just need to fix those spelling errors then I think it would deserve a gold.
By the way, thanks for using my map! :D |
| #11 FlyingSquirrel[149917] |
| pc-24-151-22-092.newm2.ct.charter.com |
| proofreading is for the weak -.-. I just got lazy at the end, I told myself, it's not THAT bad.... |
| #12 Decay[149919] |
| 66.44.173.228 |
Not bad, although there were plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes that should have been caught by a quick proof read. For some reason I know br.com screws up the red color (see one of my first reports), just go to htmlgoodies.com, find a hex code that is almost red, and use that. If it's not on a white background, you can't tell the difference. I'd say 7.
~Decay |
| #13 PeaceableGhost[149920] |
| adsl-68-73-193-203.dsl.sfldmi.ameritech.net |
Amusing game, kinda quirky report, but a fun read.
7. |
| #14 FlyingSquirrel[149924] |
| pc-24-151-22-092.newm2.ct.charter.com |
I tried the hex code once to, that didn't work either=/, so that's when I thought that it was just my video card acting up.
Alright, Alright, next time I'll have somebody proofread. |
| #15 Berra[149925] |
| h154n2fls32o814.telia.com |
Good attempt, tho' the game itself was fairly uninteresting and one sided.
6 |
| #16 Dibbler[149926] |
| 194.151.4.99 |
| I can't believe you beat Maareek! Or can I....? |
| #17 Desert Demon[149927] |
| user-0ce2kji.cable.mindspring.com |
| Odd...my first report used red without any problems. <font color="#FF0000">blah blah blah</font> worked for me...I dunno o_O. |
| #18 Chris[149932] |
| astound-66-234-209-235.ca.astound.net |
Your pictures totally blow, and their failiure at humor has caused me to hate you forever.
4.5 |
| #19 RandomKo_Orean/Aixaznkid[149933] |
| adsl-63-199-240-67.dsl.sndg02.pacbell.net |
| 6.0 Nice FS =D |
| #20 BlueRibbon[149934] |
| 65.167.44.87 |
Hey Born-to-Porn, I'll let you get to know me, if you catch my drift *winks in a homosexual manner*.
Anyways, this report was alright. The pictures really, REALLY needed border, and I got lost in them quickly. Writing was alright. 6 sounds about right. Fix pictures next time, and find a better game. And if you are going to use paint, make sure you are a pro-paint-user. Like yours truly. |
| #21 maareek[149935] |
| mblt-ac001.gtcom.net |
Well, I had a good comment that should have gone here...but I went over the limit so it's lost forever, cause I ain't typing it again. SO, I'll just say i agree with everything i said i agreed with before.
All in all, 6. Good...I want to see another flying squirrel report within a month...no pressure.
I would like to say that the only reason I did not win, was because I knew this map. That, and I wasn't zerg, so I couldn't break out my gosu muta harassment which owns on this map. |
| #22 FlyingSquirrel[149937] |
| pc-24-151-22-092.newm2.ct.charter.com |
| Okay guys, you can stop grilling me over how much it sucked. I'll just do a better one next time.... |
| #23 .Praetor[149939] |
| c-67-172-163-213.client.comcast.net |
| Feck. Looks like my comment got swallowed as well. The writing was actually pretty good in this report, which is why I'm giving it a 7. That and the nuke. And feedbacked ghosts. I was thinking about a 6, but I felt I was kept pretty abreast of how the game was going. Dunno about that whole country thing, there were some errors that could be fixed with a little review, and don't try collages unless you;re going to do them right. If you don't want to put in too much effort, do your pictures mareek style. |
| #24 FlyingSquirrel[149941] |
| pc-24-151-22-092.newm2.ct.charter.com |
sw33t! A 7! That inspires me to do better next time.
This battlereport was a test run, so now I know what to do and what not to do. |
| #25 Desert Demon[149942] |
| user-0ce2k2r.cable.mindspring.com |
| DAs are sexy... |
#26 
[149960] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
First, why your font coloring was unsuccesful (to say the least):
<font color=“red”>Iowa</font>
You'll notice that the quotations ("") are tilted, this leads me to believe that you've written it in word. These quotations ruin html, because they aren't plain characters. Either way, write it in notepad or WordPad and you'll get the plan characters. |
| #27
[149961] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Now the report.
Many, many spelling / grammatical errors. I'm guessing you failed written english too ^_^
Collages were sub-par, not especially pretty. My advice is; if you don't master weird effects, it's much better to go for a simplistic style, the majority of my latest BRs have images with a 1pixel faded border, or a subtle drop shadow.
Game was kinda bleh, something of a beatdown.
6 |
| #28 el_sux0r[150161] |
| adsl-68-79-19-23.dsl.emhril.ameritech.net |
This BR was so outlandishly and terribly written that I nearly fell out of my chair laughing.
It was great. |
| #29 wakiki[155469] |
| cable-68-117-183-96.mtv.al.charter.com |
| Huk. Last on the first BR about a game on a map I made. That version is soooo crappy, too ;] |
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