| #1 Desert Demon[150366] |
| user-0ce2kd8.cable.mindspring.com |
| Luv :D |
#2  [150369] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
Don't worry, someone will give you an 8. Happy days . . . .
( nice br btw, game was a touch boring to me though ). |
| #3 badme[150378] |
| pcp05314423pcs.norstn01.pa.comcast.net |
3rd
Nice report! This took you all of...one day?! |
| #4 Desert Demon[150379] |
| user-0ce2kd8.cable.mindspring.com |
I had nothing else to do...
Thx for rating Dag :D |
| #5 Desert Demon[150383] |
| user-0ce2kd8.cable.mindspring.com |
On a side note, *has* anyone seen Rejected? The joke is a lot funnier if you have...
Actually it's really only funny if you've seen it ._. |
| #6 Shuriken[150387] |
| ool-18be5164.dyn.optonline.net |
yo great job man
i liked the layout the best
7.5 |
| #7 Decay[150407] |
| 66.44.173.5 |
| Incredibly good job for being just one days worth of work, but I almost wish you had taken a bit more time to fill it out a bit. A few more pics and a few less spelling errors, and it would have been awesome. |
| #8 Desert Demon[150408] |
| user-0ce2keu.cable.mindspring.com |
I had more or less only one day...again, I'm leaving today :(
And there's no photoshop there! |
| #9 endersshadow[150409] |
| ool-182d2f86.dyn.optonline.net |
| With the limited time you had and...other considerations... this was pretty good. God, if I wasn't afraid of ~10 comment reports I could stand cranking these out =]. 8, <3. |
| #10 Desert Demon[150410] |
| user-0ce2keu.cable.mindspring.com |
w00tz! Thx thx thx
I'm gonna comment whore until people read the report because it's got lots of comments on it ^_^ |
| #11 Raider[150411] |
| 24.231.240.242.gha.mi.chartermi.net |
Nice report. You stretched it out a bit too much and there were some spelling errors, but it was an enjoyable read.
7 |
| #12 The-Nut[150412] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
nice.
i liked the pictures how it went from like really light to dark
7.5 |
| #13 Desert Demon[150441] |
| 152-20-169-131.globals.uncw.edu |
"I saw now way to win."
I can't believe I didn't catch that...*cries* |
| #14 EMS[150505] |
| 150.108.236.21 |
| great report |
#15  [150555] |
| ip68-230-2-63.ph.ph.cox.net |
writing - humor really detracted from the report, as did the fairly constant cussing. i had a pretty hard time following the report because of that. also needs updates, a graph or chart or even just a notes section to explain who had what would have really helped. otherwise it was alright...you were pretty descriptive and i like that. 5.5
images - in all honesty, i like these images the best. nothing fancy, dont dominate the report, just serve as a visual aid to the paragraph they accompany. the biggest problem was that it became extremely difficult to follow who had what expansion. i think this is a problem for both writing and images, minimap updates are a beautiful thing. also the writing was difficult to read. 8
game - while ego seemed to be winning most of the time, i did enjoy the constant counter attacks and survival instincts you showed. 8
overall - 7, a bit too hasty, but decent enough for gold |
#16  [150565] |
| usrns16.dialup.hawaii.edu |
I could write something long and descriptive, but I would just be reiterating what Keanu said. Its a good enough report for gold and a little more time and effort would have pushed it up to an 8.
I did get the feeling throughout the report that you were mildly foreshadowing your loss. Also, some of the side trips that you took interrupted the flow of the report more than they helped. Did badme's comments have any influence on you or the game? If so think about including them.
Anyway, here's a 7. Put a little more time and effort next time and you'll get a higher rating. |
| #17 maareek[150585] |
| mblt-ab013.gtcom.net |
| Well, so I don't seem like a jerk, since I always make you comment on mine, I'll comment on your report. Haven't read it yet but I'm sure it's better than most of mine ;P. |
| #18 Desert Demon[150610] |
| 152-20-165-19.globals.uncw.edu |
| Ass, read it ;D |
#19  [150662] |
| c-24-9-238-168.client.comcast.net |
I disagree with Keanu over the style of writing, but a few things could definitely make it better. For one, say more about your enemy. Even if you are writing this from first person, your performance pretty much revolves around him, doesn't it? That's what a 1v1 is all about. Second, talk more about your own strategy, and less about where you sent hydralisks and where he sent dragoons.
Images were nice, a minimap once and a while never hurts, but the writing did the job just fine.
Better game couldn't hurt anything either. I was expecting the unexpected turnaround or something after he took out your natural the first time ;-)
7.5, and make more! |
| #20 maareek[150667] |
| mblt-aa081.gtcom.net |
| ok ok, DD I'll read it. But I won't get to enjoy it (I can barely even make out the pics on mine on this comp). When I put out my next one you'd better comment though :). |
| #21 Desert Demon[150669] |
| 152-20-166-145.globals.uncw.edu |
Don't I always, maar?
Thx for ratings/comments :D |
| #22 RiSE (x]XR[x)[150675] |
| 69-171-154-14.clvdoh.adelphia.net |
| Quote love :D |
| #23 maareek[150877] |
| mblt-ac023.gtcom.net |
| 25th and <3...send me a modem! |
| #24 maareek[151155] |
| mblt-ac069.gtcom.net |
| As someone who did all his reports in one day...this was pretty damn good. So, I gave you 4 comments...<3 now get another one out. |
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