| #1 badme[153302] |
| pcp05314423pcs.norstn01.pa.comcast.net |
| OMG FIRST |
| #2 snowyday[153303] |
| 24.107.144.155.charter-stl.com |
| damn you...2nd |
| #3 wakiki[153304] |
| cable-24-196-21-114.mtv.al.charter.com |
| 3rd |
| #4 Some_God[153305] |
| ool-18b8c5a0.dyn.optonline.net |
| YES! I can't wait to read this... I hope it is another chapter in your awesome book. :) |
| #5 Chris[153306] |
| astound-66-234-209-235.ca.astound.net |
You're missing a few question marks.
"What about my company," Wayne asked.
"What about my company?" Wayne asked.
nod |
| #6 mattzarella[153307] |
| 162.7.33.65.cfl.rr.com |
some format stuff:
the lighter grey of your font was way too light, maybe bring it up a few shades
and use padding for your text so it's not so close to the border of your container |
| #7 Reverse[153315] |
| h0000949954c7.ne.client2.attbi.com |
!
7th |
| #8 TwistedNecro[153316] |
| lsanca1-ar54-4-3-202-139.lsanca1.dsl-verizon.net |
| Why can I read this if it hasn't been rated yet? Or has it and I'm just being dumb? |
#9  [153317] |
| d141-165-127.home.cgocable.net |
| you're being dumb, reports can now be approved without being rated - for like, 2 or 3 weeks :P |
| #10 Convider[153320] |
| HSE-Kingston-ppp329034.sympatico.ca |
Your work never fails to amaze me.
9 |
| #11 Simply_Eugene[153330] |
| pool-151-200-244-140.res.east.verizon.net |
| shit, wayne died... |
| #12 [153364] |
| d141-165-127.home.cgocable.net |
| This is a hard one to rate. I noticed some minor grammar errors, but the storyline as a whole is compelling. In addition, there are some minor formatting problems ( see Mattz's comment ). I'm handing you an 8, but it's more like an 8.4 to me. |
| #13 Krud[154624] |
| pool-68-160-213-125.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| your so cool!!! |
#14  [154669] |
| 67.176.104.160 |
An underappreciated effort, if I've ever seen one.
I liked this a lot, you're a very articulate and imaginative author, and I hope you can continue this in a venue that will better appreciate your efforts.
Good on absolutely everything, I couldn't find a significant fault in the entire work. Deep, rich, whatever you want to call it.
I call it a 10.
I only hope you actually see my comment, or my rating. I doubt anyone else will. |
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