#1  [155498] |
| d141-165-127.home.cgocable.net |
| Approved/first comment :] |
| #2 PeaceableGhost[155499] |
| adsl-68-255-162-130.dsl.sfldmi.ameritech.net |
| Nice. I don't usually read fanfiction, but this si excellent. 8. |
| #3 Jaood[155500] |
| 204-212-235-234.tv.blacksburg.ntc-com.net |
| I did not need to read this because I know he is good at the Internet. |
| #4 Dibbler[155501] |
| 213-84-180-234.adsl.xs4all.nl |
| Too late for me to read all that sexiness now. |
| #5 SnK-Arcbound[155510] |
| evrtwa1-ar11-4.14.88.79.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| I'm too scared to read... and I'm busy... |
| #6 Asmodues[155511] |
| fltg-dslttc1-30.fltg.net |
Bob Dole commands me to never finish reading a fan fiction.
I am sorry. |
| #7 Timid[155512] |
| cpe-24-30-184-75.socal.rr.com |
Done.
Good.
Out |
#8  [155520] |
| 68.79.174.39 |
| Not bad, but your title needs work Linternet. =) |
| #9 Linternet[155527] |
| larch.fatwire.com |
Hmm it appears that my first lesson on writing stuff for this forum is to post long things in chapters :)
Thanks to everyone who gave me feedback. |
| #10 PeaceableGhost[155533] |
| adsl-68-255-162-130.dsl.sfldmi.ameritech.net |
| Incidentally, why no rating? |
| #11 [155534] |
| d141-165-127.home.cgocable.net |
| sorry bout that . . . heres an 8. Thought it deserved a little more than that, really, like an 8.4 or so. Your writing was good, but there was nothing about this that really, really made it unique and special enough to deserve a 9. |
| #12 SnK-Arcbound[155543] |
| evrtwa1-ar11-4.14.88.79.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| That's a burn baby. Your not boyfriend material either. |
| #13 SnK-Arcbound[155576] |
| evrtwa1-ar11-4.14.88.79.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| I agree with the making battlereports comment above. |
| #14 Linternet[155680] |
| ool-18bd56ce.dyn.optonline.net |
| I guess the conventional wisdom of posting on Battlereports.com is to post a battle report. |
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