| #1 Some_God[157732] |
| ool-18b8c5a0.dyn.optonline.net |
| 1st? |
| #2 Convider[157733] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp316734.sympatico.ca |
| 2nd! |
| #3 dustbiter[157734] |
| bbcache-114.singnet.com.sg |
| Feels like a short battlereport/fanfiction hybrid. |
| #4 Der Fuhrer[157736] |
| host218-228.pool8258.interbusiness.it |
| Awesome Awesome, I don't know, maybe you should add some pictures, or would that spoil the effect? |
| #5 Asmodues[157737] |
| fltg-dslttc1-30.fltg.net |
I was going to make a "wtf no pics??" comment.
Damn you Hitler. Damn you to hell. |
| #6 Timid[157738] |
| cpe-24-30-184-75.socal.res.rr.com |
| 5 |
| #7 Avail[157739] |
| c-65-97-24-49.hsd1.va.comcast.net |
"A devastating volley of missiles tore into one of the Mutalisks, sending one down in flames. "
Kind of got caught up with the over-extensive description eh? |
| #8 Chris[157740] |
| astound-64-85-237-46.ca.astound.net |
| 2.5 |
| #9 Convider[157741] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp316734.sympatico.ca |
I don't see the point of about 15 line breaks after the fanfic/report ended.
Use some CSS with sexy colours next time! Some concept art-y pics might enhance the report...
5 |
| #10 Convider<hr>[157742] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp316734.sympatico.ca |
| Use the <hr> tag for those section sepator thingies. It's much simpler than putting in those dots. |
| #11 OverTheUnder[157743] |
| 12-205-145-63.client.mchsi.com |
| Im not really about the Fan fics....but it's nice that you are contributing so much to the site:D |
| #12 RabidMurloc[157746] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
Cool fanfic. Unlike some other people here, i like fanfics. This rocks, I'm worried about the terrans now. What if their pinned up against one last tank and the zerg are closing in, and all of a sudden a portal opens and the X-COM team jumps out! And Dagomar is like "I don't think we're in China anymore, cap'n!" "This isn't the Wizard of Oz, soldier, er...Actually, I'm not sure what this is. AW, hell, just open fire anyway."
That would be cool. :)
From, the Murloc with Rabies. |
| #13 SnK-Arcbound[157747] |
| evrtwa1-ar11-4.14.98.31.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| Dude, that would be soooo cool. EE, make that x-com ^^ |
| #14 BeRzErKeR[157770] |
| 216.49.74.174 |
| That would be cool . . . but this isn't X-COM. Sorry. EE will have to write that. |
#15  [157781] |
| d141-165-127.home.cgocable.net |
Honestly, I'm not sure why one would write a fanfic now (or why I wrote them to begin with a long time ago). It just seems so much more original and productive to write something that's your own, not just borrowed material. Your writing is generally pretty good though, but could use polishing up. In particular there's parts of this story that just overflow with adjectives - try to cut down on that while maintaining your vivid imagery. Not easy but worth a try.
Anyway I won't rate this unless no one else does - I'm a little biased against stuff like this. |
| #16 Reziel[157862] |
| c-67-167-79-14.hsd1.il.comcast.net |
| That was neat, but the cliffhanger was more disappointing than suspenseful. I like it only because it takes the most likely events of a terran/zerg game and ...fanficifies them. |
| #17 BeRzErKeR[157864] |
| 12-202-209-231.client.insightBB.com |
| Well, I got a better rating then last time. At this rate chap. 4 should have a 9. Unfortunatly, we're getting ready to move, so chap. 3 won't be posted for a while. |
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