| #1 wakiki[161859] |
| 24-158-233-185.dhcp.leds.al.charter.com |
| Virzd. |
| #2 Dice[161860] |
| nj-69-68-160-225.dyn.sprint-hsd.net |
| vecend |
| #3 Convider[161863] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp316631.sympatico.ca |
| vecend+virzd |
| #4 maareek[161867] |
| dblt.66-243-227-41.gtcom.net |
Well, I enjoyed it. The writing was pretty clear, though there were quite a few grammatical errors. The pics were nice. The game was not so hot, but despite that, as I said, I enjoyed reading the report.
I would give it a six. |
| #5 Convider[161868] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp316631.sympatico.ca |
| I agree with maar. |
| #6 dodopout[161869] |
| d199-126-37-5.abhsia.telus.net |
| ditto that... maybe a 7? |
| #7 NewbEye[161872] |
| dp-216-106-106-248.storm.ca |
| A good read; I found the pacing quite nice. I actually found the pics (well, the collages) a little odd -- black pic background on a white page background. Also, it wouldn't hurt to vary your vocabulary a tad more. |
| #8 Fangrim[161874] |
| adsl-70-240-216-58.dsl.hstntx.swbell.net |
Great for a first report, it seems you actually looked at some model ones before making your own :)
NJ |
#9 [161933] |
| d57-193-242.home.cgocable.net |
| not bad, 6. |
#10 [162147] |
| usrns205.dialup.hawaii.edu |
A decent if somewhat typical TvP game. Throughout the report there was a persistant feel that the T was controlling the game.
Some improvement in the pictures/writing, a more interesting game, or something might have brought this up to a gold. As it is I will give it a 6. |