| #1 YourRoleModel (relay.atinc.com)[6027] |
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Man... a 1.0... wow that's harsh.
I'm thinking of writing a novel-like report called the Peenix Legun Chronicles. I think it's an original, fresh idea. |
| #2 Alita99 (urel44.URel.Berkeley.EDU)[6034] |
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I think his report got a 1.0 because it seems unfinished. The troops are preparing and heading out for a battle with the Zerg, but we don't hear anything about it. Not even a "to be continued" message... =(
Will there be a sequel? If there is, I'd suggest tacking this onto the beginning of it to get a higher rating.
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| #3 KitNorja (dial238.pm3jcnth.jcnth.naxs.com)[6049] |
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| Yeah, I guess I forgot the 'To Be Continued...' part ;-) |
| #4 KitNorja (dial238.pm3jcnth.jcnth.naxs.com)[6051] |
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YouRoleModel - OH! DOH! I thought it was just called "Phoenix Legion" ACK!
What kind of title would you suggest? |
| #5 YourRoleModel (relay.atinc.com)[6106] |
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| I'm just teasing you for getting a one... .Praetor scored a bunch of 9.0+ with this concept. |
| #6 .Praetor (cache1.cwo.com)[6132] |
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Not recently YRM. The raters have decided, in their infinite wisdom, that the Ashrigo battle is getting slow =).
I bet they are just waiting for that first zealot to return in the form of a Dragoon. hehe. Peenix Legun. Someone ought to do a parody =).
KitNorja, I have a story on SC Legacy, the main one, entitled just Pheonix Legion, easy enough to make that mistake. Wait long enough, and I'll steal 'The Annals of the Phoenix Legion' as well......
I would recommend making sure that your installments are at least around three pages long (pasted into a word processor). Shorter stories aren't long enough to draw in a reader, even if installments come faster. And don't forget Blizzard is god. I'd recommend having your battle occur in another system, rather than making up another inhabitable planet in the Sara system.
.Praetor
www.sclegacy.com/phoenix www.battlereports.com type: other |
| #7 Persian-POW (proxy1-external.rdc1.az.home.com)[10563] |
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pics suck..
<img "http://mr-hat.com/sc/dire/minimap.jpg">
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| #8 Persian-POW (proxy2-external.rdc1.az.home.com)[10567] |
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another test.
<img "http://mr-hat.com/sc/dire/early.jpg"> |
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