"After losing the few units he had to Jpaik's Carriers, Lithium_ leaves the game, realizing that there is no hope for him or his religion. Oh well, he probably has some baking to do anyways."
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| The Fall of the Empire I | | | Author: | | | IP: | spider-tXXXX | | Date: | 01/14/01 12:01 | | Game Type: | Starcraft | | Labels: | none | | Report Rating: , # of Ratings: 1, Max: 2, Min: 2
Lifetime Rating for UDontKnOwME: 3.7778 |  | Ok people, this is my first fanfic, and the only reason I am writing it, is because I cannot get on battle.net and do a real Battlereport. So you people have not heard of me I'm sure. I'm no drefsab or DrAwesome when it comes to writing reports, but I will do my best. I am also not going to lie to you (I am so noble! Bow down to my nobility! I am THE mr.noble. I own ass! I am acting really stupid right now, so uhhh yeah...) and say this is really good. But i will try, and if I get at least a 6.0, I will continue with this series. So raters=go easy on me, and commenters=give me nice, kind, constuctive critisism (yeah right) and I will make this a better report. So ladies and gents (insert battle music here) onto the report!
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The Fall of the Empire I
It is the year 3049. The years after broodwar. The years after the deaths of the UED, the years after the survival of the Protoss, the years after Kerrigan's total rule. Kerrigan has lost some of her grip on the galaxy. The Protoss have retaken Auir, and the Terrans have retaken their sector in the galaxy. Mengskt is dead. He was assasinated by a Zerg spy. His last words to his successor were, "Kill Kerrigan, and give her body to the Protoss. Then I want you to kill the Protoss." His successor wasn't stupid though, and has tried his best to form an alliance with the Protoss, but his attempts fail. He becomes more like Mengskt everyday, and is conceiving a plan to attack the Protoss. Kerrigan is also pondering on a plan to kill her rivals and control the galaxy. So the stage is set for the next war. There are no allies, and they are all enemies. (Like how I tied that whole thing together?)
Chapter 1
"Ahhh, Ashzz. Good morning young Cerebrate. I can see that you are resting from your latest victory. Although I now have to disturb your rest," said Kerrigan.
"What is the job you have in store for me my Queen?" asked Ahszz. Ashzz is a new Cerebrate, one of the many Cerebrates that Kerrigan has created. Ashzz is cunning, ruthless, and he is clever. But he is not as intelligent as the other Cerebrates. I've heard a rumor about a domestic dispute...
"I want you to go to Auir and build an army there. And I mean build, because I am in need of your standing army elsewhere. When your army is strong enough, I want you to retake Auir for the Swarm. I want total annialation. No Protoss should survive. I also expect perfection, Cerebrate. Do not fail me. I will now send you the coordinates to Auir. Good luck, young Cerebrate,"
concluded Kerrigan.
Ashzz smiled to himself (Can they smile???). He had heard of Auir, but had never seen the planet. He thought to himself how wonderful it would be to destroy Auir. He also thought of the blodshed. He had no doubt in his mind that he could lose, but he did not know what was going on on Auir...
Chapter 2
"Good morning Praetor, En taro Adun," said Executor Kalgano.
"Ah, en taro Adun Executor," said Praetor Phalimin,"What is it that you need of me for today?"
"Well Praetor, uhhh, well, we need you to go collect minerals at the Lost Temple. We are running low, and you are the only one we could find on such short notice..." said the Executor.
"Ug, Mineral Management Duty Executor?" said the Praetor,"What are you going to be doing?"
"Just do as I command Praetor, go now and collect those minerals, and, uhhhh, hurry back," said the Executor in a faltery voice.
"Yeah, I'll bet you have some important work to do," said the Praetor under his breath as he left for his shuttle,"Probobly going to "inspect" some captured Medics as usual."
Even though Mineral Management Duty is ugly, something even uglier was on his way to Auir. And it would be that ugly thing (Ashzz, for those of you who have absolutely no goddamn brains) that be the biggest problem for him.
Chapter 3
"Hello Commander Jerrjerog," said Emperor Alastar,"I hope you are well rested." Emperor Alastar is the new Emperor of the Terrans. He has now become completely corrupted by power and Mengskt's wishes to destroy his enemies. He is a bad person, but is a good leader. He is respected by the commanders of the Terran Army.
"Hello Emperor," said the Commander over the Vid-screen,"What do you need of me?"
"It is time we made a move against the Protoss. I am tired with negotiations. They will either be our allies by their own decision, or they will be our allies through force. It is your job to land a Command Center with four SCV's and the CC crew on Auir. It is there were will begin our offensive. Do not fail me Commander, good-bye," said the Emperor as the Vid-screen went blank.
"Ok. It's time to get moving," said the ommander,"Commander Undel, get the CC out of repairs fast as well as four SCV's ready. Commander Gondome, get the crews to their stations. Commander Hamana get a supply channel open, I want to be able to get supplies and weaponry out to Auir fast when we get there. Commander Fandel, get the crews to their stations on the CC, we are going to be ready when we can lift off," ordered Jerrjerog.
"YES SIR!" answered the other Commanders.
"This is going to be an interesting trip," thought the lead Commander.
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Ok, that is the first part of my fanfic. It gets a whole lot better. This was only the warmup part of the story. I hope you all enjoy what I wrote. If there are typos, I'm sorry, but I was rushed to finish this. Thank you for reading this report. DON'T GIVE ME A HORRIBLE RATING, THIS IS NOT THE BEST PART OF THE STORY. Thank you raters, and thank you commentors for constructive criticism. Again, thank you for reading my first br. I LOVE BR.COM!! (hey I have to suck up to someone to get a good rating). |
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